
The Big Edit
Polish your manuscript ready for submission.
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The final chapter of your writing journey
Polish to publishing-ready perfection.
Have you completed the first draft of your story? Congratulations! Now, it’s time to edit.
You’ll work one-on-one with professional editors (of bestselling and award-winning books) to review, revise, and refine to the highest publishing standards.
Editing is what differentiates writing amateurs from published authors
If writing is the heart, editing is the head.
And with The Big Edit, you’ll be taught all aspects of the process by masters of the craft—from interrogating the structure and shape of your story to developing your technical writing skills on a sentence-by-sentence level and learning how to create a pitch-perfect submission package.
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In good company
We’re the book editing service with Big Five publishing professionals
Just imagine...
Editors from Penguin Random House, Macmillan, HarperCollins, Hachette, and Simon & Schuster fine-tuning your story.
(With The Big Edit, they will.)
What if...
You qualify for our submission service to the literary agents who represent Meg Wolitzer, Madeline Miller, Liane Moriarty, Celeste Ng, Michael Ondaatje, Richard Osman, Marilynne Robinson, Philip Pullman, Tess Gerritsen, Andrew Sean Greer, and Tom Clancy?
(By invitation.)
Submissions to the top global literary agencies
If your manuscript is a match for one of our trusted literary agents, you will be invited to enter our submissions process. There is no cost for this service and we neither ask for nor accept commission. It is by invitation only.
We’re the online writing course recommended by leading literary agencies.

Renowned literary agency partners
Including CAA, William Morris Endeavor (WME), The Book Group, United Agents, and more.

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Work with editors from the world’s major publishers
Your course includes editorial sessions with former acquiring editors from major global publishing companies, including Walker Books, Titan, Oneworld, and the Big Five—Penguin Random House, Hachette, HarperCollins, Simon & Schuster, and Macmillan.
They’ll oversee your revision process and help prepare your submission package for querying literary agents.
Prepare the perfect plan for the best version of your story with the cool logic of the Big Edit lessons
Get feedback from your editor on your story and chapter outline before you revise with the Big Edit First Session
Begin revising your manuscript with step-by-step guidance from the course lessons and get feedback from our beta-reader workshop
Get line-by-line feedback and a live debrief from your editor on your final submission package of the first chapters, your synopsis, and pitch with the Big Edit Second Session
Revise and revise using our guidance to become pitch-perfect for submission to literary agencies
The Big Edit Course
Edit your novel
Revise and polish your manuscript to the highest publishing standards with in-depth feedback from your professional book editor and management of the submission process.
Welcome to The Big Edit
Go from writer to author with a clear, strategic roadmap, practical tools, smart systems, and a new publishing-ready mindset shift. Get a clear editorial roadmap and a structured revision process designed to take a manuscript to submission standard. The Big Edit is designed to save you drafts by front-loading editorial expertise for strategic story development before you move to line edits.
👋 Lesson 1: Welcome
Commit to working in long, focused sessions as you begin the structural edit phase of your novel. Learn the four-phase roadmap ahead, from Structural Development through the Line Edit to your Submission Process, and discover when to book your Big Edit sessions with editors who’ve acquired, edited, and published books at Big Five houses. Set your first draft aside and start raising your standards — this is where you stop writing for yourself and start shaping a novel for publication.
🧰 Lesson 2: Preparation Guide
Learn to read your own work like a professional editor, using the formatting standards publishing houses expect —fonts, margins, indentation, and dialogue conventions, US and UK covered side by side. This lesson shows you how to build the critical distance you’ll need to edit with a reader’s eye.
Structural Development
You’ll develop your elevator pitch, story theme, structure, narrative arc, character development, midpoint, and more to work toward a chapter outline and a (pain-free) synopsis. Then it’s time for your first review session with a professional editor.
🏗️ Lesson 3: The Structural Edit
Understand the difference between a structural edit and a line edit, and why you must get your story’s big-picture elements right before you touch a single sentence. Expect bold, sweeping changes at this early stage for the very best version of your book.
🧲 Lesson 4: The Hook
Distill your novel’s premise into a single sentence: the hook that gets an agent excited. Learn the one-line pitch equation drawn from novels that sold for six and seven figures, and what your particular genre demands of its pitch. Pressure-test it until it’s sharp enough to pin to your wall.
🗂️ Lesson 5: The Genre
Nail the genre your novel belongs to, and the promise it makes to readers before they’ve read a word. Explore the key genres and their subgenres, how blending and mashups work when they’re done well. Your genre decides which shelf your book sits on and every editorial choice that follows.
🏷️ Lesson 6: The Title
Find the title that works as a statement of intent. Use the “walk your title” method to identify your story’s agent of change, the event after which nothing can be the same, and compare candidates with popular examples.
🧵 Lesson 7: The Storyline
Get to grips with the driver of every story: change. Identify your agent of change, and combine theme, conflict, and character into your plot. Nail your inciting incident, midpoint, and ending before you rewrite your working synopsis.
🖐️ Lesson 8: Story Structure with The Five Fs©
Develop your best story structure and chart your character’s moral journey using The Novelry’s Five Fs©. Learn how to apply this story spine identifying the turning points that expose your protagonist’s arc from first flaw to final reckoning.
📄 Lesson 9: The Synopsis
Turn your story into a snappy one-pager that proves your plot delivers with this diagnostic tool to reveal whether your story’s structure is actually working. Use our “steps up, steps down” model to shape your synopsis and practice the professional potted version agents expect..
📚 Lesson 10: The Chapter Outline
Build a chapter-by-chapter account of your novel that turns your story structure and synopsis into a concrete plan of action. Learn what Big Five editors look for. This document becomes your guide for the redraft, and, alongside your synopsis, what you’ll submit ahead of your Big Edit First Session
👥 Lesson 11: Casting
Make sure every character earns their place on the page by mapping the main players along our “rope of theme." Try our Four Types framework and learn to root each major player in circumstances, associations, and distinguishing detail.
🎭 Lesson 12: Character
Give characters agency by anchoring their actions in desire. Explore how deprivation creates compulsion, and how to empower the most disempowered characters. Use practical tools like our "Character Agency Ladder” to drive agency and story.
🕸️ Lesson 13: Character Mapping & Relationships
Identify your core team of around five to fifteen players and make sure each earns their place in the story. Study the web of relationships through their reciprocal wants and needs. Finish by building a visual character map to guide your scene-building.
🔴 Lesson 14: The Big Edit 1st Session
Time to hand over your story for expert review! Meet your Big Five publishing editor! Complete the one-page document covering your genre, title, hook, synopsis, central reader question, theme, word count, and deadline, and prepare your optional chapter outline to submit alongside it. This is your first opportunity to see your story the way a publishing editor would.
🧭 Lesson 15: After Your BE1 Session
Your first session is done and the notes have arrived. Learn how to take structural feedback on board and turn it into the next draft of your novel.
The Line Edit
You’ll interrogate your pacing, perspective, and treatment, to rework chapters, drilling down into sentence structure and word choice, eliminating overwriting line-by-line. Learn how to apply The Lucid Compression Technique© for outstanding prose from the first chapter. Then, it’s time for feedback on your writing from beta readers in our online community.
🔍 Lesson 16: The Line Edit
Learn what a line edit involves, and how to read your writing the way an editor reads it on a sentence level.
⏱️ Lesson 17: Pacing
Condense any slack in your timeline, and test every chapter against three essentials: a reminder of the stakes, new information, and a reason to turn the page. Master the domino effect and foreshadow with intent.
🗣️ Lesson 18: Voice & Perspective
Find the voice that’s authentically yours, then choose the vantage point that best serves your story. Work through the real differences between first, second, third, and omniscient perspective, and apply some useful rules of thumb to finalize the best POV for your story.
👁️ Lesson 19: Show, Don’t Tell
Learn to recognize the hiding places of “telling” from adverb-heavy dialogue tags to backstory and the legitimate tools (exposition, flashback, interiority, dialogue) for feeding readers information without an info-dump.
💬 Lesson 20: Dialogue
Craft true-to-life dialogue that drives drama, reveals conflict, and sounds natural. For conversations that serve the story, give every character their own agenda to break the “ping-pong” rhythm of question-and-answer and cut exposition dumps.
🎬 Lesson 21: Setting & Scenes
Decide who’s present, whose point of view we follow, and where each scene is best set to bring the drama. Learn why the problem of your world should be the problem of your character, and how to create atmosphere. Master your set-pieces with detail that grounds a scene.
💉 Lesson 22: Overwriting
Strip your prose of clutter. Diagnose and treat overwriting—the most common weakness in early drafts. Spot symptoms like didactic prose, clichéd expressions, overuse of adverbs, and redundant descriptions. Use our editorial checklist to trim sentence length, cut the fluff, and refine your style.
✂️ Lesson 23: Sentence Structure
Master logic flow, active versus passive voice, and the word order that keeps meaning clear. Vary your sentence length to create rhythm. Try our compression drills for pithy, natural sentences. Learn why shorter sentences land harder.
🍫 Lesson 24: The Word
Study how repetition, sound, and subliminal patterning shape a story word by word to create your novel’s DNA. Learn how to replace the “weasel” words that dull your prose. Explore word choice as a tool of seduction.
🖊️ Lesson 25: The Lucid Compression Technique©
Refine your prose with The Novelry's own technique for high-resolution openings: Lucid Compression**©**. Edit your opening for maximum sensory impact with our secret sauce for award-winning writing.
🔤 Lesson 26: Punctuation
Use punctuation to clue the reader into your behind-the-scenes game. Learn how line-level choices operate as instructions to the reader as to what to think and feel and when.
✏️ Lesson 27: Copy Editing & Proofreading
Understand the final polish the professionals apply, how to work with tracked changes, and how to sweep your manuscript for errors of grammar, spelling, consistency, and continuity line by line, with fresh eyes.
✨ Lesson 28: The First Sentence & the First Chapter
Craft a first sentence that establishes the voice, signals change, and primes the reader for what’s to come. Use our unique “Thing One/Thing Two” structure to plan the your all-important early paragraphs.
📖 Lesson 29: The Prologue
Test your opening against the five ingredients of a prologue and practice urgency and theme in motion.
🟠 Lesson 30: Get Feedback
Get feedback on your writing now with peer critique, a one-on-one editorial session, or a full report.
The Submission Process
Your second session with a professional book editor will involve reviewing your pitch letter, synopsis, and first three chapters, and making a plan to enter the publishing process via literary agency representation.
📨 Lesson 31: The Query Package
Assemble the three documents that will win a full-manuscript request: the query letter, the synopsis, and a polished sample of your first three chapters. Master the five elements of a strong query letter — the hook, the story, the market, the agent, the author. Choose great comparison titles, format your manuscript to industry standard, and steer clear of the red flags.
📈 Lesson 32: The Market
Position your novel the way the industry does: on the commercial-to-literary spectrum and within the word-count range expected of your genre..
💼 Lesson 33: Literary Agents
Apply for The Novelry's submission service or query independently. Build a longlist and shortlist of agents. From tracking responses to interpreting feedback and handling rejection, discover how to assess offers, meet agents, and make the best decisions for your writing career.
📣 Lesson 34: Author Career Advice
Follow the deal from acquisition to publication day: how editors pitch a book internally, how an advance is actually paid out, and why a small advance doesn't mean a small career. Get practical guidance on starting book two, building income beyond royalties, and handling social media and reviews.
🟢 Lesson 35: The Big Edit 2nd Session
Guidance to prepare your first three chapters, query letter, and synopsis, formatted to industry standard, and book your Big Edit Second Session with your editor to get your next steps toward publishing.
“The secret of good writing is to cut it back, pare it down, winnow, chop, hack, prune, and trim, remove every superfluous word, compress, compress, compress.”
A cautionary tale…
Worked with a single editor before?
Each publisher has a specific goal and many commissioning editors work in only one genre. So, when working with just one editor, be careful to ensure that they truly have experience in your niche.
Equally, a single editor might bring some of their own personal taste and judgment to the process. But a broader view can better set you up for success.
At The Novelry, we meet as a team every week to discuss our writers’ works-in-progress. So you’re guaranteed the unique advantage of combined editorial advice and expertise.
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Now represented by Watson, Little after submission by The Novelry
‘The best decision for my book. The course materials offered the tools to excavate the layers and plumb the depths of my story. The fabulous team at The Novelry were brilliant at cutting through to the heart of the problem, and their suggestions on the text helped me understand the nitty-gritty of creating on the page.’
Why The Big Edit?
Created by a Booker Prize-listed author
For the highest standards of fiction.
Progress at your own pace
A year’s access to the course.
Stay a little longer
Life. It happens to the best of us.
Money-back policy
Our Happy Writing guarantee.
Write with the best in the business
Award-winning authors. Publishing editors. Leading literary agents.
Access to Big Five publishing editors
Add further paid feedback sessions when you need them, as a member.
60+ workshops a month
In addition to your course.
Genre expertise
What’s your style?
Video masterclasses
From the likes of Kristin Hannah and Yann Martel.
A supportive writing community
Open 24/7 worldwide. The best beta-readers.
More 5-star reviews
Than any other writing course. The Novelry is the world’s top-rated fiction writing school.
A clear path to publishing
Yours if you want it. Fine if you don’t. We will help you reach pro standards.
Edit to publishing standards
The Big Edit





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60+ live writing workshops a month. A library of masterclasses with bestselling authors. An online community open 24/7. Genre fiction workshops and small writing groups. Feedback from beta readers who are writers. Invitations to events.
Edit your manuscript to publishing standards
Two one-on-one sessions online with an editor to prepare your revised storyline and review your submission package. Recorded for you to keep.
After which you can extend your membership from just $59 / £49 a month.
Noteworthy advice
Have a complete draft? The Big Edit is your course.
Earlier in the journey? The Finished Novel Course takes you from first idea to submission — and includes The Big Edit.
FAQs
If you’re bursting with questions we haven’t answered here, check out our full FAQs page or feel free to get in touch.
If you have used AI to generate any of the content in your book, you cannot pass it off as something you have created or own.
Literary agents and publishers will ask you to assure them that you didn’t use it to generate the content of your work of fiction before you sign the contract. AI-generated creative work cannot be copyrighted per the guidance of the U.S. Copyright Office.
Leave AI out of your writing life. Use it, if you wish, for the mundane, administrative chores in your life to give you back time to create valuable human content. At The Novelry, we train writers on where to find authentic ideas for the stories only they can write and to write them to the standards to meet the requirements of traditional publishers like Penguin Random House and the Big Five.
The Big Edit is designed for writers who have completed a solid draft of their novel and who feel confident they are ready to develop the editorial skills needed to take it to a professional, publishing-ready standard.
If you have a messy first draft and are still shaping the story itself—working out major plot points, restructuring chapters, strengthening character arcs, or substantially rewriting scenes—you’ll usually get far more value from The Big Write first. Many writers join The Big Write with a completed first draft and use the course to rethink and strengthen their novel with the support of a published author coach before moving on to the editorial stage.
Both are one-to-one calls with an editor of your choice from our team, all of whom have acquired and edited novels at the Big Five publishing houses.
The Big Edit First Session comes at the end of the structural phase. You send us: The Plan — your story on one page, with a synopsis of 500 to 750 words; a chapter outline of up to 2,000 words; and, if you’d like, 500 words of prose for guidance on how your voice sits within your chosen genre.
The conversation is diagnostic and deliberately big-picture, focusing on the central question, structure, plot beats, stakes, character development, theme, title, hook, and if the pitch is distinctive enough for your genre and the current market. The Big Edit Second Session is toward the end of the course. You send your first three chapters (up to 30 pages), a one-page query letter, and a one-page synopsis. Your editor will give you close feedback on the material, making suggestions to improve your query package and, if your opening is ready, they’ll invite you to submit your full manuscript, which is how our submission service begins. If it isn’t ready yet, you can continue polishing your material and return it to the team for review later.
In this self-paced course, you will enjoy 35 comprehensive lessons with videos and text giving you guidance to edit your book. Start the course before you touch that manuscript to learn how to approach your edit. Each lesson acts as a complete reference guide to which you can return time and time again during the editing process. You’ll be guided step-by-step within the course and served downloads and tools at just the right time for the revision of your manuscript. Each lesson comes in five parts: what it means, why it's important, how it works, how to apply it, and your next steps. Besides your editorial sessions, you’ll enjoy the support of the online community, and be able to join us for live weekly writing classes and regular online workshops for those at every stage of their writing, in every genre.
You will have access to the course for a year, after which it’s easy to maintain access to your course on an annual basis with our Rollover Plan for just $59 (USD) or £49 (GBP) a month.
To edit a novel, we suggest you work in chunks of time, 2–3 hours a session when you can. Your editing sessions don’t need to be daily because we will ensure you have a brilliant working plan to pick up from where you left off and continue your progress. Take your time—writing is rewriting!
Our courses are suitable for people with visual or auditory impairment, dyslexia, and for those with English as a second language. We offer an app which translates the course into 99 languages and a speak-aloud option too.
The best decision for a writing career
‘Joining The Novelry was the best decision I made for myself and my writing career. The Novelry is not just an amazing writing course; it is so much more. It is also a community of ambitious writers, authors, mentors, editors, and all-round lovely people who will be with you on your writing journey. I joined before I even had a story idea, and since then, I have written a first draft, been through rounds of edits, and have a complete manuscript I am really proud of. Throughout their submission process, I had support and guidance from The Novelry team. I am so glad that I found my home here at The Novelry and that I am now represented by James Wills of Watson, Little. I cannot wait to continue to grow as a writer within The Novelry community.’

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