

The Finished Novel Course
Craft your idea, write and edit your novel, and get feedback on your manuscript from your editor


The complete writer-to-author journey
The Finished Novel Course is your complete journey from first idea to a manuscript that’s ready for literary agent submission. Start strong with The Classic Storytelling Class to come up with the big idea for your story, mastering timeless story structure. Next, move on to writing your novel with The Ninety Day Novel Class, building daily momentum as you draft your novel with expert guidance and personal coaching from your mentor, a bestselling author. Then, revise like a pro with The Big Edit, using publishing-standard tools to shape your story, sharpen your hook, and raise your writing to the highest standards. Finally, get a full manuscript read with The Ultimate Manuscript Assessment, receiving detailed, publishing-standard feedback from Big Five editors to prepare your novel for submission to literary agents with a view to a publishing contract. It’s everything serious writers need to begin boldly, polish professionally, pitch with confidence, and achieve their ambition to go from writer to author.
Beginners warmly welcomed
Reasons not to embark on the complete writing journey
But I don’t have the time!
One hour per day. That’s all the commitment we ask of you. Just one hour a day to make your writing dreams a reality.
But I don’t have a story!
Then you’re in the right place. Step one of the course—The Classic Storytelling Class—is designed precisely to kindle your ideas and ignite your voice.
But I’m not sure I have any talent!
Not all writers suffer from imposter syndrome. Only the good ones. The art of storytelling can be learned. And our bestselling author coaches are the best in the business at teaching it.
The Finished Novel Course
The writer-to-author career path
The Classic Storytelling Class
Come up with a fantastic idea for a page-turner. Plan a storyline that excites you and learn how to bring to life complex main characters. Outline and develop the world of your tale to capture the reader’s imagination page after page.
Find the Idea
✨ Lesson 1: Let’s begin
Step into a new, playful, idea-rich phase of your writing life. Use this class to supercharge an existing idea or create a new one. Learn how a compelling premise arises from two things that don’t belong together. Bust the myths that writing requires privilege, genius, or solitude. This is your creative apprenticeship in the storytelling secrets behind the world’s all-time bestselling classics. Follow 55 lessons and complete the tasks to create a story you can’t wait to write.
🕯️ Lesson 2: Your space, your time, your mind
Create a secret world of comfort and joy. Set up your space with objects that matter to quiet the inner critic. Start fresh with a new notebook. Give yourself one golden hour a day, stolen from duty, to build the habit. The best ideas come in the other twenty-three. Fiction begins with change—first in mindset. Curiosity and compassion are your new tools.
🧙♂️ Lesson 3: What makes a classic?
Discover why the most-loved novels of all time—from J.R.R. Tolkien to Donna Tartt—use three key ingredients: an extreme situation, a touch of magic, and a deep ‘walk in my shoes’ immersion. Learn how classics dramatize the big theme of good versus evil and deliver wonderment. Bestselling stories layer conflict and the magic of transformation to keep readers hooked. The stakes must be high. Welcome to the buffet of ideas. Choose your favorite elements to build your own story.
🪄 Lesson 4: Where do ideas come from?
Use the storytelling formula: something familiar + something unexpected = something new. Begin with your own secret yearning and a story theme that pulls at you again and again. Build your main character from someone unforgettable in your past—part real, part imagined. Make them defiant and elusive. Shift your perspective: who would you be if you could be anybody? A novel is one person’s moral journey with a reward that exceeds their imagining at the start of the story.
🧚♀️ Lesson 5: Creative thinking
Begin with a seed of an idea that feels personal and emotionally charged. Learn how to caretake half-formed ideas. Get practical tools to spark ideas—dream notebooks, character lists, music, poetry, and emotional snapshots from your own life. Learn why the genre you read is the genre you should write, and how your sense of justice drives the novel forward. Start sketching character possibilities and collecting moments that move you.
Once Upon a Time
🪬 Lesson 6: The great story structure
Learn The Novelry’s Five Fs®, a clear five-part structure rooted in Aristotle, Shakespeare, Freytag, and Yorke. Discover how the story moves from what the character wants to what they need. Explore Booker’s seven basic plots, from Quest to Tragedy, and see how bestselling stories often combine more than one. Identify whether your main character has a personal flaw or a ‘cosmic’ flaw. Start assigning loose ideas to each F in your notebook. Use this structure as a tool to shape one person’s moral growth.
🧸 Lesson 7: The small story
Start with a story that’s stood the test of time. Learn why bestselling novels often grow from fairy tales, nursery rhymes, and folk tales—small stories that carry big emotional weight. Discover how The Snow Child was inspired by a Russian fable and blends extreme setting, magic, and empathy. Get your own story starter by choosing a tale you loved as a child and identifying the elements that still resonate—taboo, temptation, desire. Begin shaping a story that feels both familiar and personal, built on a foundation that’s already strong.
🧞♂️ Lesson 8: Books based on myths and fairy tales
Learn why the best one-line pitches combine something familiar with something unexpected, like fairy tales or myths reimagined. Discover how timeless tales survive because they speak truth fast, and see why 99% of publishing success depends on 0.001% of the words: the hook. Explore examples from Circe to The Silence of the Girls. Begin drafting your own hook now.
🎩 Lesson 9: A story as unique as you
Start with your flaws, fears, and longings—they’re your storytelling gold. Learn how Hans Christian Andersen turned rejection and ambition into timeless tales, and why your small, strange truth is the key to connection. Discover how wishful thinking and a hunger for justice create the arc of a story. Choose a main character who deserves a break. Care for them like a parent. What makes your story unique isn’t invention—it’s you. Every painful, hopeful part. That’s the secret ingredient behind every classic.
🎡 Lesson 10: A working model
Study a complete story in miniature, built with The Five Fs®. Learn how the author broke from tradition by creating an original tale with no happy ending, aimed at adults, and rooted in personal truth. See how honest storytelling replaces cunning, and how pain becomes power. Explore how extreme settings, character flaws, and moral justice shape lasting fiction. Use this model to begin planning your own story—one that moves from secret hurt to meaningful change.
🪦 Lesson 11: The long shadow of the little story
Trace how one story lives on in another, how we inherit and re-shape old stories, and how sorrow, bias, and memory create great fiction. Explore using first-person voice, unreliability, and moral ambiguity. Learn how to do the same: start with a fairy tale, then filter it through your experience. Draft bold, bias-filled statements for your main character. Use voice to bring your theme to life from the first line.
🔪 Lesson 12: Fairy story ideas for very adult novels
The dark-hearted fairy tales of childhood often shape crime fiction and thrillers—from Bluebeard to Gone Girl. Discover why secrets, transgressions, and forbidden rooms reappear in modern novels about women who won’t behave. See how themes like missing children, changelings, and haunted houses echo through today’s bestsellers. Consider what scared you as a child; it might be where an adult story hides.
🥾 Lesson 13: Walk in my shoes
Write simply, honestly, and with small strokes. Forget fancy phrasing—focus on clarity and emotional truth. Learn how style is shaped by theme, cast, setting, and voice. Take inspiration from Booker Prize winner Yann Martel: begin with what you want to say, then choose the form that best delivers it.
🍀 Lesson 14: Making ideas happen
Start with your sense of justice. Take a character who suffers unfairly, misjudges their situation, or represents a wider truth—and send them on a journey to set things right. Learn how every genre, from Macbeth to White Tiger, is powered by a moral choice. Build a cast around your theme: allies, antagonists, and opposites who test your hero’s growth. Give your reader a fair outcome that satisfies.
The Process
🔮 Lesson 15: Why
Find your reason for writing—what bothers you, what you can’t stop thinking about, what you want to reveal. Learn how to turn your flaws into fuel and your truth into theme. Discover how character, conflict, and story all begin with a single question: why? Build a weekly rhythm—Sunday planning, weekday noting, Saturday soul-searching. Draft the big scene that shatters your main character’s delusion.
👶 Lesson 16: Who
Begin with a character who’s special—by gift, grief, or circumstance—and give them a yearning they can’t shake. Make it something they probably shouldn’t want. Main characters are shaped by pressure: rising stakes, tough choices, and people who force them to change. Draw on two versions of yourself—who you were, and who you want to be—to create your hero and antagonist.
🏺 Lesson 17: What
Choose a token that carries love and meaning. Learn how objects in fiction stand for memory and connection. Build emotional weight through detail. Appoint someone or something that keeps your main character safe—a loyal friend, a guiding voice. Create a moral North Star for your world, even in its darkest moments.
World-building
🎠 Lesson 18: Wonder
The classics—from The Divine Comedy to The Curious Incident—use wonder to express something beyond ordinary life. Learn how to evoke that feeling by disrupting the world’s value system and revealing forgotten desires. Explore the idea of Sehnsucht—a longing without resolution—and use it to seed moments of awe. Get examples from Narnia, Gatsby, Rebecca, and Girl with a Pearl Earring. Discover how to slow the story around your wonder moment, and how to build a list of objects, events, or people that deliver wonder in your own story.
🕊️ Lesson 19: The numinous
Learn how to access the numinous—those fleeting moments of awe, mystery, or spiritual emotion that lift a story beyond the everyday. Explore the idea of the numinous as both terrifying (tremendum) and fascinating (fascinans). See how writers from C.S. Lewis to Ursula K. Le Guin embed this feeling in fiction. Discover how yearning, self-abasement, and emotional frailty unlock numinosity. A big story is powered by the main character’s desire for something beyond the world they know—and their need to see it.
🪶 Lesson 20: The feeling
Learn how to evoke the numinous—those strange, shivery moments of awe, dread, and desire. Study how C.S. Lewis, Ursula K. Le Guin, and J.R.R. Tolkien use ‘curious’ sensations to lead readers into other worlds. Explore how fiction offers not escape but recovery, consolation, and feeling. Create a character who serves as a guide—more curious, more open—to lead your protagonist toward wonder. Let the reader feel what the character feels. That’s how a novel moves from story to experience.
🍽️ Lesson 21: The recipe with two ingredients
Learn the two key ingredients that create awe in fiction: fear (mysterium tremendum) and wonder (fascinans). Explore how this mix, known as the sublime, shows up in the smallest things—a bird’s call, a falling leaf, a broken clock. Discover how to create ‘creature-feeling,’ where the character senses something vast and beyond them. Study how writers like Blake and Yeats used small, specific images to unlock big emotion.
🌩️ Lesson 22: Mysterium tremendum
Use fear to open the door to awe. Learn how mysterium tremendum—the feeling of dread in the face of something vast—prepares readers for transformation. Discover how foreboding scenes (like those in The Handmaid’s Tale or The Hunger Games) trigger ‘creature-feeling’: a sense of smallness that draws us in. Study how stories create this effect through voice, setting, and submission to authority. Begin sketching an opening that stirs dread, builds safety, and opens a door to wonder.
🦩 Lesson 23: Fascinans—transformation and terms of reference
Create transformation that feels real. Use familiar reference points—like seasons, cities, animals, or everyday rituals—to make big change believable. Learn how Tolkien and C.S. Lewis rooted magic in the recognizable to create wonderlands. Explore the idea of transubstantiation: the moment when something becomes something else entirely. Blend characters from memory with symbolic traits—fox, bear, lamb—to express theme. Study how classics like Enduring Love and The Catcher in the Rye make change visible.
🧝 Lesson 24: The crucial transformation
In this lesson, explore how literary protagonists—from Stevens in The Remains of the Day to Nick in Gone Girl—are structured to recover lost truth. Discover how fiction bends time and form to peel back false layers. Get tools to trace your own theme and genre from buried desire. Learn how to use genre as a springboard. Complete guided tasks to uncover formative comforts and define what your story seeks to resolve.
🫖 Lesson 25: A cozy start
Begin your story with comfort and care. Learn how bestselling authors—from J.K. Rowling to J.R.R. Tolkien—use cozy openings to anchor readers in the familiar before revealing the extraordinary. Study how domestic details, like sardines on toast or a feather on a pillow, create a sense of safety and value that raises the stakes. Explore the art of the gentle entry: the warm home, the sleepy protagonist, the maternal narrator. Create a strong emotional foothold for your reader so they’ll follow you into danger, magic, or mystery.
✨ Lesson 26: The Harry Potter spell
Learn how J.K. Rowling cast the perfect first-chapter spell—starting with the familiar, then flipping it fast. Study how she planned, rewrote, and shaped The Philosopher’s Stone to deliver a 4,668-word opener with airtight pacing. Discover how the midpoint marks the exact moment magic overtakes the real world. Explore the 91-step logic of the first chapter: normality disrupted, the magical world introduced, the villain named, and the hero delivered. Use dialogue to deliver world-building, and keep your strongest material up front.
🚪 Lesson 27: The portal
Consider a device that takes your character—and reader—out of the known world and into the story world. A portal can be physical (a wardrobe, a tunnel, a plane), symbolic (a dream, a threshold), or emotional (a moral awakening). Study how classics like Peter Pan and The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe use space and light to mark transformation. Explore the portal’s ties to near-death experiences, the hero’s journey, and rebirth.
🌸 Lesson 28: The garden
Build a garden in your story that acts as its first transformative space. Study how settings like Neverland, Narnia, or Soldier Island work as symbolic secondary worlds, full of promise, mystery, and emotional charge. Use your setting to reflect the wants and fears of your characters, from the cozy to the ominous. Learn how light, silence, weather, and nostalgia signal that magic is at hand. Reference myth, memory, and metaphor to define a space the reader will long for. Then draft the garden of your own novel using two focused, practical tasks.
🐾 Lesson 29: The homely guide
Give your reader someone familiar to trust. Learn how the best-loved classics—from The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe to The Secret Garden—introduce a sidekick or guide who is safe, unthreatening, and often a little irritable! Design a guide, narrator, or sidekick who leads the way—and earns the reader’s trust.
🧿 Lesson 30: The surreal
Use surrealism to crack your story wide open. A thimble becomes a kiss. A shadow gets stitched on. Learn how surreal elements aren’t random—they’re rule-breaking with purpose. Use personal fascinations, vivid objects, and sharp contrasts to spark your own surreal moments. Complete two creative tasks to generate story material that surprises even you. The surreal reveals what logic can’t.
🍞 Lesson 31: The familiar
Start your story with the comforts of home—toast, tea, order, and care. Learn how great authors ground wild tales in familiar rituals, from Bilbo’s pantry to Lucy’s tea with Mr. Tumnus. Study how characters like the Beavers or Nana the dog use parent-like care to ease readers into wonder. Use the structure of the family—even in disguise—to build safety, pattern, and trust. Don’t rush the strange. Begin with something true: the warmth of the kitchen, the rhythm of a lullaby, the shape of a day. The familiar is what makes magic feel real.
🧑🏾🤝🧑🏿 Lesson 32: The cast
Build your cast from people you’ve known. Steal their quirks, habits, and contradictions. Don’t write a bio—write the quick form with an epitaph. Give each character a role: rival, truth-teller, trickster, guide. When characters clash, your plot begins. Make theme real, not nice.
🍬 Lesson 33: Temptation
Use temptation to test your character’s moral fiber. Learn how food works as a narrative trap in classics, symbolizing desire, danger, and loss of control. Discover why temptation must be linked to your character’s flaw, and why self-discipline marks the turning point in a moral journey. Explore adult versions of temptation—wine, lust, status—and write a scene that stops just before your character gives in. What tempts them reveals them.
⚔️ Lesson 34: The battle
Explore how conflict drives every story—through value systems, moral opposition, and the shadow self. Study how classic stories externalize evil as a tangible force to be confronted and defeated. Examine battles from The Hobbit, Peter Pan, and And Then There Were None to see how brevity, tension, and choreography matter more than violence. Learn to structure your battle scenes, asking: what’s worth fighting for, and who stands in the way? The battle, whether in words or deeds, happens in the heat of the story.
🕰️ Lesson 35: Deeper magic—time
Discover how classic novels bend time to deepen character and theme. Consider the principle of eternalism—used in Slaughterhouse-Five—where past, present, and future coexist. See how storytime differs from real time: it’s shaped by need, not logic. Use time to heighten the contrast between a child’s view and the adult’s reckoning. In fiction, time doesn’t pass—it serves to reveal moral change. Complete tasks to edit your draft for ‘storytime’—the only time that matters. In classic fiction, time isn’t linear. It’s a storytelling tool.
🪐 Lesson 36: Deeper magic—space
Use space to shift your reader into the story world fast. Discover how so many classics move from ordinary to extraordinary by the 3% mark—often through a familiar space turned strange! Very quickly! Discover why it’s not description but transformation that earns belief. Complete two practical tasks: write an opening that signals change, and trim excess from your story’s entry point. In classic fiction, space isn’t setting—it’s momentum.
💎 Lesson 37: The treasure
The treasure your story delivers is not a reward, but a revelation. Learn how classic novels withhold this gift until the end. Study how The Grapes of Wrath and mythic tales use return, renewal, and reckoning to leave a lasting impact. The treasure is often self-knowledge, insight, or love reclaimed. Explore how the end mirrors the beginning, changed by what’s been learned. Complete tasks to define your character’s lowest moment and final gain.
Heroes and Villains
😈 Lesson 38: The villain
Build a compelling villain by exploring the internal and external forces your hero must confront. Study classic examples—from Hook to Voldemort—to understand how villains mirror the hero’s shadow self. Use contrast in charisma, power, and morality to heighten tension. Define what your villain wants, and how far they’ll go to get it. Craft their foil through voice, manner, and shallow relationships. Let the villain embody your novel’s theme and push your protagonist toward transformation. By the midpoint, your hero should absorb a sliver of the villain’s strength—without falling to their depths. No villain, no story.
🎖️ Lesson 39: The hero
Create a hero who doesn’t chase greatness—they earn it by resisting what’s wrong. Study avatar-heroes like Harry Potter, Alice, Lucy, and Christopher Boone—characters who begin in powerless positions but choose kindness, curiosity, and courage. Identify their ‘cosmic flaw’: the unchosen trait that becomes their gift. Learn how the hero’s early act of decency bonds them to the reader.
⚓ Lesson 40: Decency
Anchor your novel in the quiet power of decency. Learn how classics use apology, fairness, forgiveness, and self-restraint to win the reader’s trust. Explore how kindness, even in the face of injustice, builds a story the reader feels safe inside. Show your hero resisting cruelty, repairing damage, and choosing humility. Create a world worth fighting for.
The Reader
👁️🗨️ Lesson 41: Hello you, it’s me
Create a compact of trust between author, reader, and main character. Use recognition to generate intimacy—fiction works when the reader sees themselves in the protagonist. Avoid lecturing; let your character carry the theme through voice, humor, and perspective. Speak plainly, don’t talk down, and write with sincerity. Retain in the voice a childlike self who sees the absurdities of adulthood clearly. Aim for emotional truth that resonates across ages.
👼 Lesson 42: Little god
Learn how the classics offer solace and meaning by letting the reader feel ‘held in mind.’ Study the magic of stories that restore the child-life, where fear, wonder, and alienation first took hold. Discover why writing is not self-expression, but communion. Understand your role: not as genius or victim, but as a guide who transforms suffering into empathy.
🧠 Lesson 43: The older reader
Combine imagination with empathy to create fiction that deepens emotional intelligence. Learn how Theory of Mind—the ability to understand others’ beliefs, emotions, and intentions—develops in early childhood and powers the classics. Study how the authors crafted stories that teach readers to see through another’s eyes. Explore observation as a tool for empathy. Use grounded detail to build connection from the very first page. A classic doesn’t just entertain—it restores the reader’s sense of being held in mind.
The Author
📖 Lesson 44: The authors as individuals
Explore how great authors turned childhood wounds into enduring classics. Learn why personal fragility—not perfection—fuels stories. Discover how the authors mined memory, trauma, and divided selves to create fictional worlds. Study their friendships, rivalries, and creative tensions to understand how ambition and hurt shape narratives. Enduring stories begin not with divine inspiration but with a problem reality couldn’t solve.
🧶 Lesson 45: Mother god or his master’s voice?
Reassurance and immersion for younger readers in classic fiction, and how the first-person voice can create immediacy, subjectivity, and tension—ideal for coming-of-age, suspense, or psychological genres. Explore the narrative styles of the authors to understand how voice influences tone, trust, and credibility. Discover how ‘maternal’ authorial voices coax the reader.
🪙 Lesson 46: Idealism
Explore how the philosophy of Idealism shaped Tolkien and Lewis. Myths, for them, were not lies but truths breathed through silver. It was Tolkien’s view that story is revelation, and the imagination is sacred. Use tasks to clarify your own worldview and build a story with thematic power.
📚 Lesson 47: The impact of the classics
The classics became cultural giants—with vast commercial reach and deep emotional legacy. Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland, Peter Pan, and Narnia built empires of books, films, merchandise, and theme parks. Discover how Edith Nesbit shaped generations of writers from Roald Dahl to J.K. Rowling, and how Ursula Le Guin’s Earthsea transformed modern fantasy. Examine what made these stories last: high-concept world-building, universal emotional stakes, and bold character creation.
🌟 Lesson 48: My hero
For a masterclass in transforming personal sorrow into mythic storytelling, Louise shares her all-time classic. Discover how the loss suffered by the author of the great work drove his life and work, and how grief was transformed magically into the very essence of joy.
🏫 Lesson 49: On the shoulders of giants
Trace the lineage of the classics through the books and ideas that shaped them. See how Rowling, Lewis, Tolkien, Le Guin, Carroll, and Barrie each borrowed from predecessors and reimagined timeless motifs—schools of magic, enchanted portals, moral allegory, and fairylands as psychological landscapes. Discover one unknown author’s vast but often forgotten influence, and why his work offers a practical storytelling blueprint. Even the most original authors stand on the shoulders of literary giants.
💧 Lesson 50: The source
Trace the deep influence of one forgotten writer on the great fantasy writers—from C.S. Lewis and Tolkien to J.K. Rowling and Philip Pullman. Learn how his episodic, idea-rich novel created the blueprint for portals, walking quests, homey guides, moral shadows, and magical longing. Discover his signature techniques: rapid transitions to wonder, taboo-triggered temptation, time-bending narrative loops, and the powerful use of a shadow as psychological antagonist. Discover how to borrow from this early fantasy toolkit to build story architecture and infuse the ordinary with magic.
🧾 Lesson 51: The remnants
Learn what to take—and what to leave—from our secret author. Dodge the sins that dogged his work and kept him from the fame of those who borrowed from him: vague evil, lack of conflict, overwritten poetry, and meandering structure. Track five key elements that make readers care: immersive experience, emotional resonance, moral stakes, complex magical systems, and narrative pace. Score your own story against these benchmarks. Then revise your synopsis with a red pen, deleting anything that doesn’t serve the plot or develop the main character’s moral arc.
Farewell
🖐️ Lesson 52: The Five Fs® at work
Apply the Five Fs structure to your character’s emotional and narrative transformation. Learn how this framework functions across genres, from The Girl on the Train to Harry Potter, Rebecca, and Frankenstein. Literary fiction leans on inner flaws, while genre fiction uses circumstantial or ‘cosmic’ triggers. Use this flexible model to identify gaps in your own synopsis and structure your novel around escalating dramatic pressure. Finish by allocating your story material to each F.
🚀 Lesson 53: Ready for take-off!
Consolidate every one of your chosen elements into a working pitch and prep your creative toolkit for the draft ahead. Consider once more the full buffet of options—cozy world, portal, garden, battle, treasure—and ensure your story hits high stakes, a human theme, and a transformational arc. Refine your protagonist’s flaw. Commit to a prose style that moves quickly and stirs emotion. Then, gather your tools: a novel planner, a reading list tailored to your world, and a community to support your journey. You’re now ready to write!
📦 Lesson 54: Planning for success
Get ready to clear space—on your shelves, your screen, and in your head. Create a dedicated reading shelf for this novel only. Remove anything ‘nice but not necessary.’ Tidy your digital workspace and place your novel folder front and center, synced to the cloud. Learn how preparation affects focus and momentum. Preview the one-page planning method from The Ninety Day Novel, including your hook, theme, and reader question. Use the checklist to sharpen your idea into something bold, focused, and submission-ready. This final step gets your creative house in order before the real writing begins.
🌌 Lesson 55: Last words
Close with inspiration from a genius of our time: stay curious, look up, and never give up. This lesson reminds you why storytelling matters—it makes sense of the world and lights the way for others. You can do this. Your story matters. We can’t wait to meet it.
Time to book in with your author coach for a session to dive into the storyline and make it all-singing and dancing before you put pen to paper!
Your course certificate
Receive recognition of your achievement. Well done.
The Ninety Day Novel Class
Prepare and develop your initial idea, construct your novel from the ground up, develop a productive writing practice, power through the middle with bold plotting, and raise the stakes toward a satisfying ending.
The Inspiration and Preparation Phase
Discover the big hack that will change your creative life. Learn the one characteristic great writers need, and the essential ingredient that makes a page-turner. Boost your creativity, and receive guidance on creating the time and mental space to write around your day job.
✨ Welcome
Set the foundation for writing your novel with some espresso shot to boost your morale and get you in the flow. Kick some old habits with some unusual tips to change your state of mind to one that is positively refreshed and raring to write!
📚 Read and Be Inspired
Read what you want to write! Study first chapters to see how great novels raise questions they later answer. Focus on story over style. Use reading to quell doubt daily, and build your confidence. Keep notes and prepare questions for your coach as your story begins to take shape.
🌙 Bedtime Stories
Reconnect with the books that first stirred a desire to write. Reflect on the emotional imprint of your early reading. Writing begins with that same private charge. Let gratitude, not pressure, guide the work. The impulse to write is your longing to speak across time and space.
🔁 Habits
Design a writing life that fits your real one. Build a simple routine that anchors your writing at a regular time each day. Avoid waiting for inspiration—consistency is the source of creative energy. Frequency matters more than duration.
🧠 The Big Hack
Make a meaningful sacrifice to claim time for writing—something must go. Identify what you’ll give up to honor the work ahead. Interrupt the cycle of perfectionism by writing fast and free. Write by hand in timed sessions to bypass the inner critic. Speed lowers self-consciousness and unlocks voice. Capture raw material first—refinement comes later.
🔒 Privacy
Protect your work from feedback, judgment, or scrutiny while it’s still forming. Keep the process private to preserve freedom and courage. Don’t announce your novel or share early pages. Privacy is the condition for real discovery and risk.
❤️ Empathy
Build a character by stepping inside their experience. Begin with feeling, not facts—let your empathy lead. Treat your character as a mystery to discover, not a device to control. The better you understand their contradictions, the more truthful and compelling your story will be.
🌫️ Moods
Track your emotional state and work with it, not against it. Don’t wait to feel inspired—use your current mood as material. Keep writing through restlessness, boredom, or doubt. Show up. Let the act of writing transform your mood, rather than relying on your mood to begin.
🙏 Bless You, Writers
Recognize that writing has its complexities. You’ll face resistance, loneliness, and self-doubt—but writing is an act of generosity. Honor your need to create, and commit to it. Writing well means living well. Trust the process, protect your spirit, and keep faith with your story.
🧩 What is Story?
A story begins with change. It puts a person in jeopardy. Story is structure—not style—and it must change the character by the end. Plot isn’t decoration; it’s the engine that reveals who your character truly is capable of becoming.
The Construction Phase
Take it steady with step-by-step guidance to prepare a one-page plan that packs a big plot. Say goodbye to writer’s block. A good story (almost) writes itself, so you and your writing coach will put an exciting storyline in place to get off to a cracking start.
🧭 Lesson 1: How to stay on track with the course
Use the first 15 days to build your story—alternating between planning and early exploratory writing—before your full draft begins. Stay connected to your writing coach and submit ‘The Plan’ for feedback to keep your story development on track. If you’re rewriting, use this phase to reassess structure and elevate your idea. This is where you build the habit, commit to daily 60-minute writing sessions, and set yourself up to finish a first draft.
📖 Lesson 2: Welcome to your novel
Shape your novel’s premise by crafting a working title, a one-line pitch, and a promise to your reader. Start with something you know or care deeply about, then create distance by shifting time, place, or character to unlock perspective and theme. Identify your protagonist’s flaw and charm, then root your story in the voice and style of books you love. Keep refining the idea daily in your notebook—flipping it, challenging it, adding stakes—until it becomes a story worth the reader’s time.
🦸 Lesson 3: The Hero Book
Choose a single Hero Book to guide your novel-writing journey that offers a clear, reliable structure. Read it nightly to internalize its rhythm and shape. This book becomes your technical mentor, helping you solve story problems as you draft. It’s your companion for the next ninety days. Use it to support your structure, voice, and ambition.
⏰ Lesson 4: The golden hour
Build the habit of showing up daily for one hour to keep your novel alive in your subconscious. Even a light touch—reading yesterday’s work or jotting notes—feeds the 23 other hours of reflection that shape the story. Track-laying happens between sessions. Momentum comes from continuity, not volume. One hour is enough.
📚 Lesson 5: The genre
Understand what genre is and how it works. Learn how to use genre to define your story’s territory, structure, and reader promise. Explore examples across fiction to see how genre shapes plot, character, setting, and theme. Begin to identify the genre of your novel to give it coherence and direction.
🏔️ Lesson 6: The setting
Choose a time and place that shapes your characters, plot, and mood. Use setting to generate atmosphere, reveal character, or frame the story’s moral universe. Research real locations or build imagined ones that feel lived-in and essential to the story. For fantasy or sci-fi, create thresholds between worlds and combine the familiar with the strange. Make setting work as metaphor, emotional driver, and lens for your protagonist’s worldview.
🎩 Lesson 7: The magic trick
Build your story’s arc using the three-part structure of The Pledge, The Turn, and The Prestige. Shape your plot around a character’s transformation—what they want, what they resist, and what they become. Practice illusion through moral change. Sketch a journey that promises real stakes and delivers powerful, surprising resolution.
👤 Lesson 8: The main character
Design a character with a clear flaw, desire, and contradiction. Anchor the plot in their resistance to change. Focus on how they behave under pressure—not backstory, but present struggle. Build empathy by showing what’s at stake for them emotionally. Give them a worldview that will be challenged. Let the story test and transform it.
🧱 Lesson 9: The plot
Start shaping your plot by identifying the problem your main character must face. Learn how to use structure as a flexible guide, not a rigid map, by working back from a possible ending and sketching key complications along the way. Explore the ‘Man in a Hole’ story shape and other narrative trajectories to create emotional movement. Begin using The Plan—your one-page outline—as a working tool that responds to the writing. Focus on pressure, escalation, and change as you throw rocks at your character’s beliefs and force a reckoning.
🪜 Lesson 10: Simple story structure
Learn the foundational two-act structure—problem and solution—anchored by a midpoint that forces transformation. Use The Five Fs® to map your story’s arc: Flaw, False Hope, Flight, Fury, and Facing It. Understand how each stage reveals your character’s blindspot, trials, and growth. Study examples from contemporary fiction to see how this structure builds momentum and resolution. Begin sketching your own Five Fs to shape the outline of your plot, using this framework as a flexible, development-focused tool—not a rule.
🪝 Lesson 11: The hook
Create a sharp, one-sentence pitch that captures your novel’s premise, character, conflict, and stakes. Build it around irony—emotional, moral, or situational—to give the idea lift and twist. Learn the structure of a compelling hook: who it’s about, what they want, what’s in their way, and what’s at risk. Explore techniques from both literary and high-concept fiction, including the ‘X meets Y’ formula and the ‘What if...’ prompt. Use the hook to test your story’s power, motivate your process, and prepare for agent pitches, publisher sales copy, and submission success.
👥 Lesson 12: The cast
Build your cast by splitting your own traits into characters, then widen the net. Use parts of your personality—flaws, strengths, contradictions—to shape your leads. Add figures from your life with a twist: change names, genders, or roles. Invent with feeling, not revenge. Explore the ethics of representation and consider whose story you’re telling. Draw from lived experience or research with care when writing outside your own identity. Finish with a list of characters who offer dramatic potential and truth.
🥸 Lesson 13: Character development
Create credible characters by listing their quirks, flaws, fears, and secrets—then use those to reveal personality through action and dialogue. Skip backstory dumps by knowing each character deeply: their job, income, past loves, relationships, regrets, and what they want. Use a short list of 20 prompts to fast-track this work, unlocking plot and scene ideas as you go. Focus on the top five to ten characters and return to this exercise during slower writing days to keep the work moving. Characters drive story—start drawing them with precision.
🗂️ Lesson 14: Getting organized
Set up your writing environment and tools to keep momentum. Use folders to store drafts, character sheets, and notes. Keep a hard copy of your outline visible. Use your notebook to capture freewriting, ideas, and emotional responses. Track your scenes with a spreadsheet or calendar. Protect time with a daily writing schedule. Build a system that supports consistency and focus. Writing a novel requires discipline—your workspace and tools must help you stay clear, prepared, and committed.
🗺️ Lesson 15: The Plan
Create a one-page snapshot of your story to guide your writing and coaching sessions. Draft your hook, synopsis, theme, and the central question your reader will be reading to answer. Use this live document to shape your plot as you write—updating it often. Submit your Plan at least 24 hours before each session so your coach can track your development and help refine your premise. This working outline will clarify your structure, genre, and goals, becoming the backbone of your novel and a professional tool to move your idea toward publication.
✍️ Lesson 16: Let’s write!
Begin drafting, even if your story feels incomplete. Focus on daily progress—start with 250 words and build gradually. Use your updated Plan weekly to track changes, knowing your plot and character may shift as you write. Don’t share your draft yet. Protect your focus. Show up, write, revise, and keep going.
🧠 Lesson 17: Point of view
Choose between first or third person based on the story’s needs. Learn how first person creates immersion and unreliability—ideal for thrillers and character-led narratives—while third offers distance, breadth, and universality. Understand free indirect speech as a powerful tool to blend close perspective with third-person narration. Try your scene in different POVs to find the best fit.
🗣️ Lesson 18: Voice
Forget finding your voice—focus instead on speaking plainly and truly. Let voice emerge both from how you see the world and how you might address a smarter stranger. Good voice convinces by not trying too hard. Explore examples of relaxed, confident storytelling in action. Avoid fakery or flourish. Use understatement, guilelessness, and humor as your tools. The goal isn’t to impress—it’s to invite the reader in so they forget the writer is there.
🪟 Lesson 19: Chapter one
Learn why first chapters are never final—they’re rewritten dozens of times—and how even great writers fumbled their openings. Discover the importance of setting a calm, confident tone, introducing character and setting and piquing the reader’s curiosity. Focus on what your protagonist wants, hint at what they need, and begin with a grounded moment that reflects your theme. Write 250 relaxed words.
🕸️ Lesson 20: Character mapping
Design each supporting character with a moral arc that affects your protagonist’s development. Map their trajectory—how they change across the story—using simple moral shifts. Ensure each character throws ‘rocks’ at the hero to reveal flaws and create friction. Balance your cast across the moral spectrum and track their influence on the plot. Use The Novelry’s Four Types Method as a tool for close-knit groups. Once you know what each character wants and how they behave, you’re ready to write them scene by scene.
🧑🤝🧑 Lesson 21: Relationships
Build a dynamic web of relationships that define your protagonist’s moral arc. Learn to map each character’s role as helper or hinderer, anchoring your story in conflict and desire. Study triangular tensions and push-pull dynamics that generate dramatic momentum. Explore subplots by uncovering hidden motives and unspoken needs. Create a visual character map to clarify narrative pressure points and refine every scene. Let tension between characters shape your story’s energy, movement, and meaning.
👐 Lesson 22: Emotional strategies
Assign each major character a core emotional strategy—how they’ve learned to get love and attention. Choose from four core types: the Savior, the Flower, the Hero, and the Recluse. Observe how this ingrained tactic shapes their relationships, drives their dialogue, and triggers conflict. Use this lens to enrich character interactions, heighten tension, and create psychological credibility. Characters may moderate or switch strategies depending on the scene, but one dominant ploy should underpin each principal’s behavior.
🌳 Lesson 23: The theme
Test every story element—setting, cast, and plot—against a central thematic tension: what argument is the novel making? Explore conflicting values in your characters to dramatize this tension, placing your protagonist at the center of a tug-of-war. Use bold statements like ‘X is more likely than Y’ to guide your choices. Add your working theme to The Plan.
💓 Lesson 24: The heart of a story
Find the emotional truth at the center of your novel—a moment of vulnerability, connection, or personal reckoning that carries moral weight. Begin with a private dedication to someone who embodies what matters most to you. This becomes your compass. Let your heart lead the writing, drawing from love, loss, and care to shape meaning for the reader. Select a guiding quote or song to anchor your intent. When you write from feeling, the reader feels it too. That’s the story’s purpose: to make us care.
🕊️ Lesson 26: The sacrifice
Explore sacrifice as the measure of commitment in story and life. Learn how great stories—from ancient myth to The Alchemist—use sacrifice. Understand its central role in the Hero’s Journey, where the protagonist gives up comfort for a greater purpose. Discipline reveals strength. This lesson invites a deeper connection between writer and story, asking what your characters are willing to lose.
🔨 Lesson 27: A better craftsman
Step back from the page and assess your work. Re-read your recent writing to identify weak scenes, tired phrasing, and moments where plot, dialogue, or tone drift off-course. Revisit your Plan, revise it if the story has shifted, and tighten your cast’s motivations. Root out clichés. End each chapter with a tease. Let the prose be plain to support the story’s truth. Shape your material—but don’t overwork it. Today, write as an editor.
🖼️ Lesson 28: The big picture
Visualize your story as a sequence of six turning-point scenes, using cinematic techniques to clarify structure and momentum. Identify your protagonist, goal, antagonistic force, and stakes. Then build a visual storyboard using notecards or tools like Canva to map transitions and flesh out scenes. Each location must earn its place.
🎬 Lesson 29: Happy writing
Learn how to work through self-doubt, navigate real-life interruptions, and make meaningful progress scene by scene. Discover proven mindset strategies from working writers—including how to embrace the rhythms of good and bad writing days, stay grounded in real life, and use your Hero Book to problem-solve at night. Leave the desk on time, avoid early fiddling, and trust the day-to-day process.
🧮 Lesson 30: Taking stock
Pause to review progress before moving to the next phase. Use the stocktaking spreadsheet to chart chapter-by-chapter word counts, setbacks, and lessons learned. Update The Plan as needed and reflect on how far you’ve come. If you feel off-track, schedule time with your coach. Whether slow or fast, the point is to keep going. This is a victory lap before the next leg: The Swim.
The Swim Phase
Learn expert skills and insider techniques to quickly improve your writing style. Find your voice and build your confidence as your word count passes the 10,000-word mark.
🏊♂️ Lesson 31: In the swim
Enter the Swim Phase—a shift from story set-up to story flow. Revisit the simple five-part structure to sketch out the story shape without over-planning. Learn how Kazuo Ishiguro wrote The Remains of the Day in just four weeks using ‘The Crash’: a self-imposed writing lockdown focused on output, not polish. Learn how compulsion drives story. When a character wants something intensely, the novel almost writes itself. This phase is about rhythm, grace, and pace. Begin writing forward with daily momentum and character-led intent.
🧭 Lesson 32: Moral range
Explore your protagonist’s capacity for action under pressure by mapping their moral range. Define what they can and can’t do, and identify the lie they live by that distorts their worldview. Use this to create tension scene by scene—especially as the story shifts from old world to new. Know when to press the button—what they’ll do when cornered—to drive story turns and deepen emotional impact.
🔥 Lesson 33: Compulsion
Pinpoint your main character’s compulsion—the hidden need that drives their actions, blinds them to truth, and fuels the story’s engine. Learn how desire, denial, and delusion work together to create narrative drive. Explore how this inner hunger creates moral tension and raises stakes. Repressed or transgressive compulsions create page-turning drama. Use moral range and inner conflict to expose the character’s organizing myth and push the story toward revelation, transformation, or downfall.
🎭 Lesson 34: Conflict
Build conflict that reveals theme. Let your protagonist and antagonist pull from opposite ends of a moral or emotional spectrum. Use tension to test values, surface hidden agendas, and create moments of rupture that shape character and story. Design the moment of greatest conflict so that it dramatizes the central question of your novel and forces change.
🪄 Lesson 35: From magic to mystery
Let the mystery deepen as your draft develops. Shift from plotting answers to posing questions—what the reader is reading to find out, and what you’re writing to discover. Use the one-page plan to hold structure lightly while staying open to surprise. At the two-thirds mark, allow meaning to emerge—private, profound, and unspeakable. Write to learn what haunts you. Let mystery drive the story forward.
📚 Lesson 36: How to write a cult classic
Borrow Jack Kerouac’s methods to create immersive, character-led fiction with lasting impact. Study his use of real people, not types, and mimic his overfamiliarity, fast prose, and vivid detail to convey immediacy. Learn to write with pace and presence—using observation over exposition—to give the illusion of spontaneity. Use these techniques to produce bold, idiosyncratic work.
🎭 Lesson 37: A real dream
Master the technique of ‘show, don’t tell’ by using concrete sensory detail and true-to-life dialogue to immerse the reader. Learn how to build scenes that feel vivid while still knowing when to step in and tell. Explore how Kerouac’s prose reveals the power of language to reflect emotion, and where pure ‘showing’ can fail.
🫂 Lesson 38: Assumed familiarity
Learn how assumed familiarity can immerse the reader instantly—bringing characters to life without formal introduction. Study how Kerouac uses eccentricity, catchphrases, and vivid, selective detail to distinguish a large cast. Use tics, colorful backstories, and out-of-type traits to avoid stereotypes and animate even minor characters in a few bold strokes.
👑 Lesson 39: The romantic imagination
Explore how the author Muriel Spark used fiction to exalt the romantic imagination over realism, building an authorial approach of taste, sensibility, and theme. Learn how to channel your own aesthetic convictions into character and story, free from convention. Discover how to make the uncommon feel true, how to embed meaning through voice and tone, and how to use fiction to reframe reality.
🔁 Lesson 40: The use of repetition
Use repetition to build intimacy with economy. Establish character through repeated phrases or gestures. Repetition keeps the reader’s eye on the cast while you advance theme. Deploy signature catchphrases that echo the novel’s central question, like a red ball bouncing across the story. Don’t repeat themes directly—repeat character affectations. Later, in the edit, you will trace this coded pattern through every page to sharpen focus and create a story that keeps readers turning pages.
♻️ Lesson 41: Redemption
Explore how great fiction offers moral restoration—not through absolution, but through affection and time. Learn how to use the redemptive arc to shift your character from what they want to what they need. Study the technique of flash-forward to deliver a sense of earned perspective. Redemption can be quiet or spiritual, structural or thematic. Understand how even flawed characters can be forgiven, and why good writing must grapple with grace.
🥛 Lesson 42: Keep it simple
Streamline your story by asking: whose story is this, what do they learn, and how do they change? Reduce characters, settings, and complications that aren’t essential. Troubleshoot problems like weak conflict or a protagonist too close to yourself. Use quick fixes—change gender, background, or name—to create distance. Anchor the plot in present conflict, not backstory. The goal: a clean, energetic through line.
✂️ Lesson 43: Overwriting
Learn how to cut overwriting before it sabotages your story. This lesson shows how bloated prose—didactic tangents, tired set pieces, excess emotion, and decorative adverbs—slows your pace and distances readers. Study examples from Hemingway, Baldwin, Morrison, and Walker to see how great writers use restraint. Apply three core techniques: trim adjectives and adverbs, reduce description to pinpointed detail, and shorten sentence length. Good writing leaves space for the reader.
✍️ Lesson 44: Becoming an author
Start working like a professional preparing for publication. Learn how to format your manuscript correctly—spacing, punctuation, paragraphing, and chapter layout all contribute to how the reader receives your work. Adopt a consistent file naming system, save drafts daily. Use a clean, conservative layout to earn trust before your story delivers the surprises. This lesson sets the standards that separate the aspiring writer from the working author.
📍 Lesson 45: The midpoint
Pinpoint the exact moment when your character can no longer go back—the midpoint of the novel. Identify the event or crisis that forces a shift in strategy, where their old ways fail and a new outlook begins. Show how they absorb qualities of their antagonist, confront hard truths, and begin their transformation. Update The Plan with this turning point, anchoring it in theme and character arc. This lesson crystallizes your story’s change trajectory—what they wanted was wrong; now it’s time to fight for what they need.
The Heat Phase
Here’s where you fall in love with your story. Banish bad habits and keep your eye on what the reader wants to stay on track with your plot. Discover some game-changing writing power tools, and raise the stakes in your story.
🎵 Lesson 46: Music
Use music as a tool to charge the energy and rhythm of your writing. This lesson introduces a new creative phase—The Heat Phase—focused on boosting pace. Learn how instrumental music can lift your prose and how lyric-driven tracks can teach economy. By the end, you’ll build a writing practice rooted in pace and feeling.
🔥 Lesson 47: From What If to Why?
Shift the driving question of your novel from ‘What if?’ to ‘Why?’ to deepen plot and character. Refine the core reader question using Maslow’s hierarchy of needs—starting from physical survival and safety to love, esteem, and purpose. Study how bestselling novels sustain tension through a single, evolving question. Use your character’s willful refusal to meet basic needs to create dramatic intrigue. Craft a story that plays on human behavior, digging into what your character won’t do—and why. A great novel hinges on one bold, burning question.
🧵 Lesson 48: The B Story
Construct a subplot that amplifies your novel’s theme and throws the main character’s journey into sharper relief. This secondary storyline should represent the opposite value system or outcome—embodied by a standout secondary character—and bring it into conflict with the ‘A’ plot. Study how published novels use B Stories to heighten stakes and expose the moral consequences of your protagonist’s choices. Decide where this subplot will peak, ensuring it helps your hero reject the extreme and claim their own way forward.
🤥 Lesson 49: The lie
Find your novel’s core message by identifying the lie it reveals. Lies generate conflict, fuel suspense, and distort desire—whether personal, political, or cultural. Use examples from Orwell, Du Maurier, and Coetzee to examine how theme emerges when falsehood is exposed. Reframe character motivation by showing what they believe that isn’t true, and structure your novel as a journey from illusion to truth. Learn how to embed the lie in dialogue, catchphrases, and chapter turns to heighten dramatic stakes.
🧌 Lesson 50: I’m a creep
Use your shadow self to unlock honesty in your writing. Identify your flaws, contradictions, and moral complexities. Practice observing your darkest instincts, then shape them into your protagonist’s turning point. Keep a visible list of problems as they arise in your draft; naming them unlocks solutions. Learn to slow narrative time around self-revelation moments, as Colm Tóibín does, to give moral insight weight and emotional clarity.
😨 Lesson 51: Suspense
Build suspense by withholding information and creating unease. Study how Rebecca and In a Dark, Dark Wood use repetition, contradiction, and delay to disorient and tease the reader. Use short chapters, flashbacks, and emotionally charged contrasts—hot/cold, light/dark—to keep tension rising. Assign a ‘trigger word’ to each chapter and increase its danger over time. Withhold answers until after the midpoint, when the worst thing must happen. Suspense is built on uncertainty—what the reader fears is more powerful than what they know.
🔧 Lesson 52: Make it harder
Raise the stakes. Impose constraints to sharpen your writing: shorten chapters, limit word counts, or apply a ticking clock. Increase external pressure on your main character—cut resources, add danger, create urgency. Tight structure boosts pace, and hard limits force invention. The harder the context, the more potent the message.
💬 Lesson 53: Crackling conversations
Write dialogue that feels alive and loaded with intent. Learn how to craft character agendas, cut exposition, and leave space for subtext. Discover how to avoid dull ‘ping-pong’ exchanges and use silence, refusal, or abrupt exits for tension. Explore why contractions, clipped speech, and differentiated voices make dialogue real. Master clean tags, minimal adverbs, and active scenes that reveal character beneath the lines. This is where dialogue starts doing real narrative work.
🧠 Lesson 54: That’s peculiar!
Learn how to write with dissonance—deliberately placing details that don’t fit. Study the masters of the short form, like Chekhov, Carver, and Hemingway, to sharpen your ability to show what jars instead of what explains. Use visual discord to jolt your reader’s perception and invite emotional depth without melodrama. Highlight sensory oddities and peculiarities that spark vivid immersion. Choose standout details that linger in the mind. Let your prose be unexpected, strange, and true.
🎵 Lesson 55: The leitmotif
Discover how a light recurring detail—like a phrase, image, or object—can build continuity, add depth, and create intimacy between writer and reader. Explore the difference between heavy-handed symbols and subtle echoes that function like a shared in-joke or chorus. With examples from Vonnegut, Kundera, and Forster, learn how to thread a small motif through your novel to highlight emotional themes, mark time, and anchor meaning without exposition.
🐇 Lesson 56: The absurd
Introduce the irrational into your novel to deepen realism and resonance. Draw from Camus, Kafka, and Vonnegut to explore characters in conflict with a meaningless world. Use contradiction, bathos, and surreal events to mirror existential truths. Give characters odd behaviors or false beliefs and unlock humor in tragedy. Absurdity lets your story bypass logic to process pain. Add a comic wrong note! Let the bizarre do the lifting.
✒️ Lesson 57: The full stop. Period.
You will study Raymond Carver’s radical economy of style to understand the emotional power of clean, unadorned prose. Learn how to end scenes and chapters with impact using the ‘dying fall’—a literary technique that creates an introspective pause in the reader. Use punctuation, silence, and space to invite the reader in. Then stop. Let them think.
🍋 Lesson 58: Backstory
Minimize backstory to keep momentum and preserve immersion. Avoid explanatory digressions and let the present action reveal character and history. If background must be included, use it sparingly, incompletely, and only when it advances the story. Prioritize mystery, pacing, and sensory detail over explanation. Draft a private inventory of essential backstory in your notebook—then leave it out.
🔀 Lesson 59: Transitions
Learn how to shift between timelines or perspectives while maintaining the progress of the story. Structure each timeline to serve the story and anchor transitions with mirrored images or echoed prose. Study structural examples—from Slaughterhouse-Five to Revolutionary Road—to master seamless cuts and purposeful contrast. Build dual narratives that interact meaningfully. Whether alternating chapters or blending timelines inside scenes, use each shift to reveal character truth and deepen the theme. Transitions must feel inevitable, not mechanical.
🏅 Lesson 60: The prize
Consider what success means for you and this story. Visualize the prize—awards, impact, personal fulfillment—and use that vision to fuel your writing. But weigh it against the price: solitude, vulnerability, and the need for validation. Don’t show or share your draft yet. Keep your vision intact and stay focused on momentum. Book a coaching session. Let the writing be its own reward.
The Enlightenment Phase
Using the inside secrets of a Nobel Laureate, you’ll apply new masterstrokes to fulfill the promise of your story. Discover the deft and economical touches that give the reader those ‘aha’ moments, and see the proof on the page that you’re mastering the skills of the craft.
🧘♂️ Lesson 61: Mastery
Enter The Enlightenment Phase by studying a master at work—Nobel Laureate, J.M. Coetzee. His novel Disgrace becomes your blueprint for serious fiction. Embrace slow, scrutinized craft. Discover moral sleight of hand, structural control, and linguistic precision. Learn how personal wreckage becomes literary gold. Through his example, start to treat your fiction as both the lighthouse and the rock using exposure, self-revelation, and sacrifice.
🤯 Lesson 62: Difficult questions
Learn from the painstaking process of J.M. Coetzee to embrace uncertainty. Discover how doubt, revision, and slow accumulation work for your craft. Writing isn’t about having answers—it’s about asking hard questions. Use notebooks to track your progress, explore your insecurities, and gather material.
🔪 Lesson 63: Self-destruction
J.M. Coetzee strips identity to its core in Disgrace, creating fiction through radical self-erasure. Explore the relationship between self-sacrifice and narrative power, where character and author collide in philosophical confrontation. See how the writing becomes an ethical act—an unflinching confrontation with shame. Writing at this level demands internal conflict. By witnessing Coetzee’s willingness to burn down the house of self, understand how fiction can become an act of creative destruction—yielding a story of brutal grace.
🏷️ Lesson 64: The title
Explore how a novel’s title encapsulates its magic, the agent of change. Study examples from literature that use eponym, image, juxtaposition, or reference. Test titles against your story’s meaning and evolution. Use this lesson to begin generating titles that capture the premise of your story at its core.
🩸 Lesson 65: The wound
Explore how personal loss fuels fiction. A wound—both authorial and fictional—drives a character’s compulsion. Understand how to write from suffering without sentimentality. Use this lesson to identify the wound in your own story and main character, to give your novel emotional integrity and transformative powers.
🌉 Lesson 66: The bridge
Revisit your opening sentence as your draft progresses—it should beckon the story’s end. Use your first line to seed paradox, establish theme, and set the reader’s expectations. Track how character and language evolve through re-drafts. Write a ten-word sentence that captures your protagonist’s dilemma.
👣 Lesson 67: Back and forth process
Embrace the messy motion of drafting—give yourself to the writing, then step back to question and refine. This lesson draws from J.M. Coetzee’s 17 drafts of Disgrace to show how great work emerges from doubt, persistence, and craft. Learn to navigate the discomfort of not knowing, and trust that taste and judgment are sharpened by failure. Use the first draft to explore freely—there’s time to look smart later.
⏳ Lesson 68: Present tension
Explore the dramatic force of the present tense. Learn how it creates instability, complicity, and immediacy by removing the safety of hindsight. Through examples like Disgrace and The Color Purple, see how present-tense narration drives moral urgency and places the reader inside the character’s crisis. If your prose feels flat, consider testing a tense change—even late in draft one.
💻 Lesson 69: Poet and programmer
Write sentence by sentence with the dual precision of a programmer and the emotional depth of a poet. See how structure emerges from theme, and how rhythm becomes a literary device. Discover how prose can carry musicality, and how writing becomes a form of self-navigation. Build meaning and movement, advancing line by line, like code.
🕰️ Lesson 70: The chapter outline
Create a working chapter-by-chapter outline to clarify the structure and pacing of your novel. Use it to map intentions, identify gaps, and simplify where needed. Study Coetzee’s Disgrace for a model of formal, purpose-driven structure: 24 chapters, each self-contained, each building tension and meaning. Focus on progression and economy—state your purpose, fulfill it, and move on. Use the outline to track your story’s momentum and ensure every chapter earns its place.
🌿 Lesson 71: Let them live
Free your main character from backstory and let them step forward. The best characters contradict their traits, hold true and false beliefs, and surprise both writer and reader. Write with paradox. Leave room for ambiguity at the end, allowing your novel to cast a longer shadow.
🎭 Lesson 72: The point of tragedy
Examine how tragedy operates as a vehicle for truth. Learn Aristotle’s three essential components—hamartia, peripeteia, and anagnorisis. Understand how tragedy evokes catharsis, forces reckoning, and offers the writer a deeper path to meaning. Study the five-stage structure of tragic narrative. Discover how writing reveals what you want to say—and how tragedy delivers truth through emotional disasters.
💖 Lesson 73: What is good?
Explore how great fiction transcends simple notions of good and bad to confront moral ambiguity. Using Disgrace by J.M. Coetzee, learn how visionary states like hypnagogia deepen your protagonist’s self-awareness and enrich narrative meaning. Trace David Lurie’s arc from egotism to humility, observing how memory, vision, and anagnorisis (tragic recognition) shape his internal reckoning. Discover how grace—not goodness—offers the novelist a more radical aim.
❓ Lesson 74: The big question
Refine the question driving your story by identifying what the reader is reading to find out—whether it’s whodunnit, will they get the prize, or who is this person really? Study how this central question can shift mid-novel, as in The Talented Mr. Ripley or Disgrace, evolving as character, setting, or theme develops. Use the question as both narrative engine and moral lens. Establish it clearly, revisit it often, and make it deliver personal transformation for both character and reader.
📘 Lesson 75: The story so far
Review the full arc of your novel and draft a working synopsis that captures your story’s potential without getting bogged down in imperfections. Use this moment to regain purpose and re-engage with your characters’ journey. If needed, book a coaching session and update The Plan. This is your opportunity to reframe the work, strengthen the through line, and prepare to carry the story forward to the end.
The Home Phase
Combine the key elements of storytelling and see theme, character, dramatic irony, narrative arc, and subplots working in harmony for a satisfying ending. Get advice on taking this draft to publishing standards. And then celebrate! You’ll have a manuscript in your hands and a story readers will love.
🏠 Lesson 76: Welcome home
Review the final structure and make adjustments to ensure the story is sound and grounded. Contrast your main character’s initial façade with their new self to clarify the novel’s arc. Use dream imagery and metaphor to explore how personal symbols, memories, and meaning can enrich your story. Prepare a sketch of the ending. Use the subconscious signals—night thoughts and dreams—that will now help finish what you’ve built. The home stretch begins here.
🪜 Lesson 77: Let’s build
Assign your existing chapters to the Five Fs framework rooted in classical tragic structure. Use this scaffolding to make sense of your draft and prepare it for a strong finish. Reorder material, if needed, to clarify escalation and transformation. Whether your chapters are short or long, give each a place in this sequence. Begin shaping your ending. This final phase is about making the book inhabitable—for you and your reader.
🏛️ Lesson 78: The house of magic
Use music and hypnagogic recall to explore each emotional stage of the story as a space: a messy front room, a closed bedroom, a blocked escape, a chaotic kitchen, and a bathroom of reckoning. Revise your Plan and schedule a coaching session to align story shape and character change as you approach the ending.
🛁 Lesson 79: The rooms
Plan your chapters as spaces within the larger structure of the house of your novel. Avoid episodic drift by ensuring that every chapter flows naturally from the last. Cut anything that doesn’t build both the psychological interior and action-oriented exterior.
🎨 Lesson 80: Interior style
Raise the standard of your writing by setting a higher bar for every sentence. Evaluate every line: is it necessary, true, distinctive? Create contrast: plain-speaking can sharpen the impact of strangeness. Build toward beauty and power by making each sentence count.
🏺 Lesson 81: Ornaments
Lend your novel the personal, the things that bring you comfort and joy—objects, sounds, and memories that mean something you. Scatter these ‘ornaments’ through your characters’ homes, names, and dialogue to build a world that feels lived-in. Choose names with meaning, add leitmotifs with private significance, and shape a place rich with emotional texture.
🧳 Lesson 82: The attic
Learn how to use memory as a narrative space distinct from backstory—the ‘attic.’ This is where you and your main character explore forgotten emotions and formative impressions. Use this mental storehouse to create atmospheric revelations that unfold in real time. The attic holds what’s unsaid. Return to it in moments of reckoning or reflection, and draw from its contents to deepen intimacy in pivotal scenes.
🧼 Lesson 83: Housekeeping
Expect messy days—when life disruptions knock you off track. Learn how to recover from derailment without spiraling. Use your notebook to make quick notes instead of forcing bad writing. Trust your original Plan and cut what doesn’t serve. Avoid writing about real-life grudges—they destabilize tone. Prioritize stability, repetition, and time over novelty. Build a quiet, protective routine around your process. Keep the novel safe, warm, and clean from inner sabotage.
🛏️ Lesson 84: And so to bed
Craft an ending that opens, rather than closes, a window. Examine famous last lines that spark mystery, and understand how a question (rather than plot closure) becomes your final gesture. This lesson encourages a subtle tying of threads, not a tidy bow—space for reflection and peace for the protagonist. Reflect on your own season as a writer, and let the novel go when the ideas stop coming. Complete your draft knowing it’s whole—for now.
🪑 Lesson 85: Home alone
Writing reveals more than it tells—what you’ve put on the page may expose more of you than intended, even behind fictional distance. Don’t seek outside opinions yet. Stay inside the work. Keep the mystery intact. Discover what this draft says about you, and decide how far into yourself you’ve truly gone. Resist the urge to share. The story has found its voice—and you may need to sit with it.
🚑 Lesson 86: First aid kit
Receive your collection of best writing tips from master writers. Use these as a personal survival guide for when the doubt creeps in. Explore the complete set of insights from published authors at The Novelry. Discover what they unanimously agree matters most. This lesson is a writer’s emergency kit for staying the course and finishing strong.
🏁 Lesson 87: Leaving home
Pause before editing. Set the manuscript aside for at least a month to gain the distance required for ruthless revision. Use that space to sharpen your judgment, stay curious, and strengthen insight. Then, revise with attention to your novel’s opening. Is the dilemma clear? Is the compulsion strong? Does it reflect the theme and arc? Make sure the story arises from character, offers transformation, and delivers what the reader needs.
📔 Lesson 88: The second draft
Step back for a month before beginning your second draft. Use the break to read recent novels in your genre, experiment with ‘sideways writing,’ and sharpen your hook. Revisit your story with distance, ready to reshape it with clear eyes. Draft a revision plan—consider chapter structure, themes, and stakes. Prepare for The Big Edit, where you’ll receive expert editorial support to transform your draft into a submission-ready novel.
🏆 Lesson 89: Success
Define success on your own terms before seeking it in publishing. Discover how to stay grounded through setbacks, resist the lure of fame, and preserve your joy in writing. Learn to process rejection without ego, and build resilience with humility and kindness. Find inspiration in James Baldwin’s philosophy. Prepare for revision with The Big Edit and know that real success lies in loving the life and work of a writer—and you’ve got that, and a killer process, in the bag!
🎉 Lesson 90: Congratulations!
Celebrate! You’ve built the habit, learned the craft, and shaped a novel only you could write. Acknowledge the discipline it took to get here. Download your certificate, share the news, and put your feet up. This milestone is now a happy and significant moment in your new life as a writer, writing.
Plus genre-specific lessons, mini courses in memoir and children’s fiction, and resources.
Authors mentioned in the course include: Jane Austen, Donna Tartt, Kazuo Ishiguro, Stephen King, Raymond Chandler, Patricia Highsmith, Daphne du Maurier, Gillian Flynn, George Saunders, Kurt Vonnegut, Shirley Jackson, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Rachel Cusk, Sally Rooney, Ian McEwan, Emily Brontë, Zadie Smith, Toni Morrison, Jean Rhys, Carson McCullers, Charles Dickens, Agatha Christie, Ernest Hemingway.
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The Big Edit Class
Revise and polish your manuscript to the highest publishing standards, with in-depth feedback from your professional book editor, and management of the literary submission process.
Turning Pro
Go from writer to author with a clear, strategic roadmap, practical tools, smart systems, and a new publishing-ready mindset shift. Get a clear editorial roadmap and a structured revision process designed to take a manuscript to submission standard. The Big Edit is designed to save you drafts by front-loading strategic story development.
👋 Lesson 1: Welcome to The Big Edit
It’s time to commit to working in longer, focused sessions to get the best from this new draft. Discover when to seek feedback, how to use it, and what it takes to prepare a pitch-perfect submission. Learn how to work with input from editors who’ve acquired books for the Big Five houses. Start to raise your expectations of your own work—this is where you stop writing for yourself and start shaping a novel for publication.
👓 Lesson 2: Becoming the reader
Look at your manuscript through a reader’s eyes. Learn when to step away from your draft and how to spot what’s working (and what isn’t). Read other books strategically now, benchmarking your novel against successful titles in your genre. Take ownership of your book as a product for readers, not just a personal expression.
🧹 Lesson 3: Order! Order!
Clean your workspace, block out deep-focus time, and approach your story with calm logic. Use our prompts to uncover what’s great, what’s flawed, and what’s missing. Go back to the reason you started writing it, and remember what makes it truly lovable. Now, reframe your novel as a compelling, structured product—ready to earn its place on a bookshelf.
📄 Lesson 4: The smart manuscript
Format like a pro. This lesson shows you how to prepare a professional publishing manuscript. Follow industry-standard conventions for font, spacing, margins, paragraphing, punctuation, dialogue, and chapter layout. Learn the rules for page numbers, scene breaks, italics, title pages, and more, and pack a few apps and tools recommended by the authors and editors on our team.
🗂️ Lesson 5: Set up your folder
Build an efficient editing workspace using apps like Scrivener, Dabble, or a structured folder system. Set up scenes for easy navigation and restructuring. Learn to use timeline tools, plot grids, tagging, and version control. Organize research, track characters, and filter scenes by focus. Move easily between overview and detail with version tracking, scene reordering, visual plot grids, and distraction-free modes. But if tech’s not your thing, we have a workaround or two!
🩺 Lesson 6: Your check-up
Take stock of your mindset, your material, and your role as a storyteller. Let’s make sure you’re mentally and practically prepared to begin editing. Reflect on the story you’re telling: is it yours to tell, and are you equipped to do it justice? Let’s get you in great shape to nail it. You’ll complete a full pre-edit checklist, taking a moment to re-evaluate your story’s origins and your role as its author.
The Developmental Edit
You’ll develop your elevator pitch, story theme, structure, narrative arc, character development, midpoint, and more to work toward a chapter outline and a (pain-free) synopsis. Then it’s time for your first review session with a professional editor.
🧱 Lesson 7: What is story? A reminder
A story centers on change for the main character. Learn to identify the protagonist (who undergoes the greatest transformation), distinguish them from the hero (who may not change), and understand the role of the narrator (who witnesses the events). Explore how plot, setting, character, and time interact to shape narrative.
🗂️ Lesson 8: Genre glossary
Genre shapes reader expectations and drives market positioning. Identify your novel’s primary genre, even if it blends several, and explore the characteristics, conventions, and subgenres of major categories, including romance, thriller, fantasy, science fiction, literary, YA, MG, memoir, and more. Avoid common genre-specific missteps and get to work with your comparable titles.
🏷️ Lesson 9: The title
First, identify the agent of change in your novel—the moment, event, place, or character after which nothing is the same. Use this insight to generate title options that reflect your book’s core purpose and shape. Test your shortlist for market fit and memorability.
🧲 Lesson 10: The hook or one-line pitch
Craft a concise, compelling sentence that captures your novel’s premise. Use it to shape your edit, excite literary agents, and fuel the entire publishing chain from pitch to press. Focus on the stakes of the story. Explore proven structures for hooks—whether character-driven, dilemma-based, high-concept, or speculative—to supercharge your submission.
🧠 Lesson 11: An agent on the pitch or hook
Refine your working hook using real-world insight from top literary agents, who break a strong pitch down into three essentials: character, setting, and conflict—without relying on gimmicks or overworked language. With examples from successful submissions, you’ll see how a powerful hook opens doors.
✋ Lesson 12: The Five Fs
Develop your best story structure using The Novelry’s Five Fs®. Learn how to apply this story spine to any genre or form, identifying key turning points that expose your protagonist’s arc—from internal flaw to final reckoning.
🎸 Lesson 13: A bonus lesson from ‘The Boss’
See The Five Fs in action through a Bruce Springsteen ballad. In this lesson, you’ll track a full narrative arc—from Flaw to Facing It—within the structure of a single song. Learn how emotional stakes and character change can be packed into a tight space with a masterclass.
🖼️ Lesson 14: The big picture
Learn how filmmakers and novelists—from Ridley Scott to Nabokov—use scene-mapping tools like index cards, Post-its, and storyboards to visualize a story. Pinpoint your six major scenes and plot the beats between them. Use free tools to build a visual storyboard for your narrative. See your novel at a glance as a sequence of unmissable scenes.
🧮 Lesson 15: Approaches to plotting
Explore multiple methods to structure your novel. In this lesson, you’ll build a flexible working synopsis by combining The Five Fs with other plotting frameworks to choose the plotting tools that best serve your story.
🎭 Lesson 16: Theme and plot
Get character, theme, and conflict working together. Frame your theme as a potent argument—with two sides in vehement conflict—to drive character change and narrative pace. Test your theme by casting for and against it.
⏳ Lesson 17: The midpoint
Locate the point of no return in your novel—the moment when everything changes. Explore classic midpoint examples from The Godfather, Pride and Prejudice, Disgrace, The Great Gatsby, and more. Use our Kleenex Test and reverse-engineering techniques to engineer the axis of change in your story.
📄 Lesson 18: Synopsis
Write a professional, plot-driven synopsis that includes your main characters, central conflict, and the story arc. Discover what agents expect: no blurb-style teasers, no withholding of twists, and no indulgent prose.
🧵 Lesson 19: Synopsis workshop
Learn how to spot gaps in structure, weak stakes, and unclear character arcs. Rewrite your synopsis with practical tips from the team to showcase your story.
📚 Lesson 20: The chapter outline
Build a chapter-by-chapter outline using our tool to track pacing, character arcs, word counts, recurring motifs, cliffhangers, and key details like dates and locations. This is your map from first draft to finished manuscript.
👥 Lesson 21: Casting
Strengthen your cast by mapping the main players along the ‘rope of theme.’ Learn the Four Types Method from The Novelry. Study examples from major works, and learn how to anchor each character through associations, action, and distinguishing detail.
🕸️ Lesson 22: Character mapping and cast relationships
Identify your core team—around five to fifteen players—and ensure each earns their place in the story. Study the web of relationships through the lens of reciprocal wants and needs, with emphasis on dramatic tension, conflict, and moral push-pull. Create a visual map of your cast to reveal the power dynamics.
🧨 Lesson 23: Character agency
Give characters agency by anchoring their actions in their hidden desires. Explore how deprivation creates compulsion, and how to empower the most disempowered characters. Use practical tools like our ‘Character Agency Ladder’ to drive agency for more passive leads.
✊ Lesson 24: Getting to grips with the material
Update your outline, then interrogate every chapter: Why here, why now? What changes? Use the downloadable template to track chapter length, word count, and story flow. Learn the principles of effective chaptering—when to enter and exit scenes, how to use location shifts, and where to place cliffhangers. Cut weak subplots and merge flat characters; every scene must earn its place.
👥 Lesson 25: Meet the editorial team
Get ready to hand over your story for expert review from your Big Five editor at The Novelry. Understand the difference between structural edits, line edits, and what to expect from each.
🛑 Lesson 26: Let’s check The Plan
Prepare for your Big Edit First Session. Submit The Plan, your synopsis, your chapter outline, and (optionally) your prose to your editor. This is your first opportunity to see your story the way a publishing editor would see it.
Line Edit
You’ll interrogate your plot and characters, rework chapters, drill down into sentence structure and word choice, and eliminate grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors line-by-line. You’ll learn how to apply our unique technique for advanced prose skills: Lucid Compression®.
Next, it’s time for feedback on your writing from beta readers in our online community.
🕵️ Lesson 27: Interrogation
Begin your second draft by asking the hard questions, moving from ‘what if’ and ‘what next’ to ‘so what.’ Cut what no longer serves. Reorder scenes for impact. Use our unique interrogation framework to examine each decision: Does the hook honor the title? Does each word earn its place? Tighten and recommit to the reader’s journey.
📖 Lesson 28: The prologue
Whether or not you plan to include one, use a prologue to pinpoint your story’s central question, raise the stakes, establish setting, and ring the change from the start. Learn what makes a prologue work: urgency, intrigue, and theme in motion. By the end, you’ll have fresh insight into what makes your story matter.
✍️ Lesson 29: The first chapter
Know what to deliver up front: the main character, the setting, the problem, and the emotional tone. Use our unique ‘Thing One/Thing Two’ structure to show both the surface conflict and the deeper story problem. Study how standout openings introduce the voice, and both the status quo and disruption.
🚫 Lesson 30: The cardinal sins
Root out the most common mistakes that weaken a manuscript. Tackle the big ones: excessive backstory, telling instead of showing, weak world-building, and overuse of adverbs. Replace flat exposition with dramatic action, build emotional depth through character behavior, and let the reader do some of the work!
✨ Lesson 31: The first sentence
Craft a first sentence that signals change, establishes the narrative voice, and primes the reader for what’s to come. Study examples across genres to understand what makes a first line unforgettable.
🗣️ Lesson 32: Voice and perspective
Explore the options of first and third person to select the right narrative distance for your story. Use practical tools like colour-coded POV maps to track multiple perspectives across your chapters. By the end, you’ll have a firmer grasp of how your characters see their world and how best to tell their story.
🎬 Lesson 33: Structuring a scene
Decide who’s present, whose point of view we follow, and where it’s best set to bring the drama! Use contrast, subtext, and physical movement to generate tension. Study examples from great novels and apply techniques like ‘get in late, leave early.’
🧨 Lesson 34: Creating suspense
Pair actions with their opposites, repeat trigger words to build unease, and escalate danger through your chapter sequence. Use short chapters, mannered dialogue, and deliberately misleading cues to create a story the reader can’t look away from. Study how famous novels use sleight of hand, flashbacks, and forward hints to keep secrets just out of reach.
🗨️ Lesson 35: Dialogue
Craft true-to-life dialogue that drives story, reveals conflict, and sounds natural. Give each character an agenda, avoid exposition dumps, leave things unsaid. Study the importance of varied syntax and voice differentiation.
💉 Lesson 36: A cure for overwriting
Strip your prose of clutter. Diagnose and treat overwriting—the most common weakness in early drafts. Spot symptoms like didactic prose, clichéd expressions, overuse of adverbs, and redundant descriptions. Use our editorial checklist to trim sentence length, cut filler, and refine and define your style. Study a full line-edit example, with tracked changes and genre-specific notes.
🧪 Lesson 37: Lucid Compression
Refine your prose using The Novelry’s signature technique: Lucid Compression®. Edit your opening for maximum sensory impact and credibility with our secret sauce: confessionary detail, humble specifics, technical precision, local texture, oxymoronic imagery, physical disturbance, and tonal counterpoints. Use it to create immersive openings that win awards!
✂️ Lesson 38: Sentences
Hit style at the sentence level! In this lesson, you’ll cut clichés, drop filler, and aim for muscular, memorable lines. Learn why shorter sentences land harder. Study sentence strategies from the masters to strip those long-winded lines down to get to the heart of the matter.
🧱 Lesson 39: The word
Study how repetition, sound, and subliminal patterning (from The Great Gatsby) shape a story word by word. Learn how to identify and replace ‘weasel’ words—those filler terms that dull your prose. Explore word choice as a tool of seduction, creating sensory effects. Then begin to ‘code’ your novel’s DNA.
🔡 Lesson 40: Punctuation
Use punctuation to clue the reader into your behind-the-scenes game. Learn how line-level choices like the full stop, comma, dash, ellipsis, colon, and semicolon operate as instructions to the reader as to what to think and feel.
📚 Lesson 41: Thesaurus
Use this tool to upskill your prose. Explore the value of etymology and historical thesauruses when writing speculative or period fiction. See how authors like Samantha Shannon use constructed language to deepen immersion and world-building.
✅ Lesson 42: Last checks
Prepare a submission-ready manuscript from typeface and margins to scene breaks and title page formatting. Then, revisit every chapter with fresh eyes: does each one deliver change, purpose, and tension? Reflect on your ending—has your protagonist truly driven the outcome of this story? Use this final sweep to take the novel to submission-ready status.
🟠 Lesson 43: Get feedback
Assess whether your manuscript is ready for feedback and explore our three routes: peer critique, a one-on-one editorial session, or a full assessment. Learn how to seek and process feedback effectively—who to ask, when to ask, what to share (and not share), and how to apply criticism constructively. Bring on the readers! You’re ready!
The Submission Process
Your second session with a professional book editor will involve reviewing your pitch letter, synopsis, and first three chapters, and making a plan to enter the publishing process via literary agency representation.
🎯 Lesson 44: Pitch perfect
Craft a market-ready pitch and position your novel by identifying its USP, audience, and comp titles. Use examples from bestselling modern novels like Tomorrow, and Tomorrow, and Tomorrow, then apply the structured five-part framework to write your own market-ready pitch.
🪶 Lesson 45: The story
This is your back-of-book copy: concise, enticing, and focused only on the beginning of the novel. Learn how to tease the central hook and introduce your protagonist in just a few lines, with the stakes all there and a clear narrative question.
📈 Lesson 46: The market
Understand where your book sits in the current publishing landscape. Identify smart, commercially viable comparison titles—not just for creative guidance, but as essential sales tools. Study how publishers, editors, and sales reps use these comps to assess market potential, pitch to retailers, and drive acquisition decisions.
🧳 Lesson 47: Agents
Build a longlist and shortlist, and prepare a standard submission package—query letter, synopsis, and first three chapters—ready to adapt per agent guidelines. Apply for The Novelry’s bespoke submission service or learn how to navigate independent querying, from tracking responses to interpreting feedback and handling rejection. Assess offers, meet agents, and make the best decision for your long-term writing career.
📣 Lesson 48: Publicity and promotion—after the deal!
Audit your online presence before submission, approach social media strategically, and understand your role in the publishing process after the deal. You’ll explore how campaigns are structured—from proofs to press—and what to expect from developmental edits through to cover design, marketing, and launch.
🧭 Lesson 49: Career advice
Work productively with your publishing team, and manage deadlines with care. Understand the evolving role of the author in marketing and publicity, and make informed choices about your online presence. Build your writing community, attend events, and support peers generously. Learn how to handle reviews, and why your sales record doesn’t define your future.
🧠 Lesson 50: The final stages
Diagnose late-stage problems in your manuscript before submission. Use four advanced tests to assess your novel’s readiness: clarity of concept, emotional investment, cast depth, and quality of line-level execution.
🟢 Lesson 51: Are you really ready?
Use the editorial video briefing to review what a strong submission looks like, then prepare your materials: query letter, synopsis, and first three chapters (no more than 30 pages), formatted to industry standards. It’s time to submit for your Big Edit Second Session.
🛤️ Lesson 52: Not there yet?
If your submission isn’t ready, use editorial feedback as a springboard—not a verdict. Reconnect with the original spark of your story, or start afresh if the love has faded. Detach your self-worth from publishing outcomes, and root it in the creative act itself.
🏁 Lesson 53: Ready? Let’s go!
Celebrate the finish line. Whether you’re submitting to agents or marking a personal milestone, reaching the end of The Big Edit is a major achievement. You’ve done what many never do: you finished a novel. Own it. Share it. Rejoice in it. And if you’re ready to submit, know that we’re behind you all the way and you will have access to the very best literary agencies in the world.
Books referenced in The Big Edit
Structural examples include Rebecca by Daphne du Maurier, Frankenstein by Mary Shelley, The Girl on the Train by Paula Hawkins, My Sister, the Serial Killer by Oyinkan Braithwaite, Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë, The Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger, Never Let Me Go and The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro, The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald, and The Line of Beauty by Alan Hollinghurst.
To explore voice and rhythm, the course encourages close reading of Cathedral by Raymond Carver, the Collected Stories of Anton Chekhov, The Quiet American by Graham Greene, The Good Soldier by Ford Madox Ford, and Disgrace by J.M. Coetzee.
For market awareness and stylistic benchmarks, we work from contemporary titles such as Lessons in Chemistry by Bonnie Garmus, Tomorrow, and Tomorrow, and Tomorrow by Gabrielle Zevin, Big Little Lies by Liane Moriarty, The Paper Palace by Miranda Cowley Heller, The Midnight Library by Matt Haig, and Eleanor Oliphant is Completely Fine by Gail Honeyman.
The Ultimate Manuscript Assessment
Enhance your manuscript’s quality and marketability with marked-up revisions from bestselling publishing editors. And a clear plan for submission to literary agents.
Next Steps Toward Publishing
You will receive an action plan with guidance and advice on how to implement our feedback. If your manuscript requires further work, we will include a detailed follow-up plan and offer suggestions for next steps. You can then book any further Paid Feedback Sessions with our editors to work together toward submitting your manuscript to leading literary agencies.
Membership of The Novelry gives writers access to over 40 writing classes a month, including guest events with authors, literary agents, and publishing professionals, plus recorded masterclasses and our writing community of beta readers for ad-hoc feedback. What’s more, you will find yourself supported by other writers like you worldwide who will cheer you on at every step. A published author needs a platform, and The Novelry gets behind each and every writer loud and proud to celebrate their success.
If your manuscript is a match for one of our trusted literary agents, you will be invited to enter our submissions process, in which we submit your manuscript to our trusted literary agencies for representation and publication.
Meeting with the Editor
For those seeking feedback to make an informed decision as to their next steps, nothing beats the opportunity to have meaningful dialogue with experienced industry professionals connected to the publishing industry worldwide. Writing a novel is a long haul and the least you deserve from a paid service is to enjoy a session where the focus is entirely on you and your manuscript.
You will be invited to book a 45-minute in-person debrief with your editor to discuss their feedback on your creative work. This is an opportunity for you to ask further questions and discuss in detail your writing process onward toward becoming traditionally published. This online meeting is recorded for you to keep and is included as part of your manuscript assessment.
A Marked-Up Manuscript
Our manuscript assessment report includes a marked-up manuscript that focuses on the detail of your creative writing, considering what each scene adds to your story, your characters, and your overall plot development. We highlight the best sentences and flag areas for improvement so that you can make sure your story really shines.
Structural Development
You will receive a detailed report of some 20 pages that evaluates every aspect of your entire manuscript, from the writing and the structure to the setting and the characters. We look at both the big picture (such as the narrative arc, plot beats, character arcs, and central questions) as well as the finer details (such as subplots and pacing), offering advice and practical steps so that you can continue to improve your manuscript.
We’ll examine it just as an editor would in a publishing house.
The Pitch
It is important to tighten the premise of your story into a single sentence, often called the pitch or the hook. This is one of the most important tools when it comes to securing an agent, so we always begin here. We will give you top tips to improve your pitch so that it’s compelling and designed to excite publishers. We also look at your ambition and how your work meets the requirements of your genre for your intended audience, offering ideas on how your novel or memoir might be positioned and its potential within the current market.
Recommendation to Leading Literary Agents
Why Do You Need a Literary Agent?
Almost all new writers seeking to be traditionally published need a literary agent in today’s publishing world. The major traditional publishing houses account for almost 80 per cent of book sales worldwide and acquire books almost exclusively from literary agents. A good literary agent can get you a traditional publishing deal, as well as TV and film rights. If you want to be published by one of the major publishing houses, also known as the Big Five (Penguin Random House, Hachette Book Group, HarperCollins, Simon & Schuster, and Macmillan Publishers), you’ll want to find the right literary agent to get you a book deal.
Understanding Agent Listings
Agent listings are hard to navigate. You’ll research literary agents no doubt for many weeks to find those who represent your genre, whether it’s historical fiction, science fiction, crime fiction, middle grade, etc. As you begin work to query literary agents, you’ll pore through each literary agency’s list, scrutinize their submission guidelines, spend time learning how to craft a strong hook, write a great query letter, and fret and sweat over every detail down to the subject line of your email query letter. After all that, you’ll no doubt be happy to sign with the first agent who offers you representation!
Finding the Right Agent
But even if a literary agent shows interest, requests a full manuscript, and likes your writing, you may still have questions. How well are they regarded in the publishing industry? New agents may not have contacts at a publishing house that represents authors in your genre. What would their submission process be? Editors receive submissions from many literary agencies, but they will prioritize their inbox according to how highly they regard a particular literary agent. You want to sign with the right agent.
Demystifying the Publishing Industry
Many new authors think the publishing industry is impenetrable, a closed shop. But that’s not the case. The writer’s market is stronger than it has ever been. You might be closer than you think. In fact, most literary agents and publishers are in search of the same thing. A literary agent views the query letter with the same eye the acquiring editor of a publishing house does. They’re looking for a certain something, and we know what that is because our team has hands-on experience of the publishing process, having worked as acquiring editors for the Big Five publishers. Getting a literary agent interested is a challenge but we can dramatically improve your chances.
How We Can Help
We work with writers to get them ready for major publishing contracts, and TV and film rights. We are in touch with literary agents on a daily basis and prime them on forthcoming manuscripts from our writers with regular meetings. If your manuscript is a match for one of our trusted literary agents, you will be invited to enter our submissions process. There is no cost for this service and we neither ask for nor accept commission. It is by invitation only. Literary agencies representing the big names of fiction trust submissions from The Novelry because they’ve come to expect publishing-ready manuscripts from our graduates.
‘If there’s a book that you want to read, but it hasn’t been written yet, then you must write it’
Submission to the top global literary agencies
If your manuscript is a match for one of our trusted literary agents, you will be invited to enter our submissions process. There is no cost for this service and we neither ask for nor accept commission. It is by invitation only.
We’re the writing course most recommended by leading literary agencies.

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Says Becky, ‘I found The Novelry at a time when I was ready to give up. I was feeling very low on confidence and knew I’d be my own worst enemy if left to my own devices. The sessions with Emylia, my writing coach, were a real highlight—she always made me feel like she genuinely cared about my novel, and I was constantly amazed at the way she engaged with the story and the creative suggestions she brought forward. The sessions kept me on track and helped me work through plot kinks along the way and I felt like I had a real champion through the whole process.’
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You can spread the cost too, with monthly payments.
Plus, you can extend your access to the program and keep everything included from just $55 or £45 after your year of access ends. It’s the smartest plan for writers who mean business, and includes a full manuscript review from our Big Five editorial team too!
Your year is structured in stages to create, write, and edit your book, allowing you the chance to work step-by-step through each phase and take any breaks you need between them. You will begin with The Classic Storytelling Class to come up with the idea for your novel and plan your story, then you will write your first draft with The Ninety Day Novel. Finally, you will be guided to raise your book to publishing standards with The Big Edit, before you submit your work for The Ultimate Manuscript Assessment and move on to the submission process (if invited).
This is a self-paced program, with over 200 lessons served on our beautiful online platform by video and text. You have immediate access to all lessons. Enjoy the lessons on any internet-connected device. Watch the video, read the text, and use the ‘speak aloud’ feature to listen. You’ll need 30 minutes for each lesson and probably some thinking time to capture your thoughts and ideas as you start writing. This might be a good opportunity to start setting aside an hour a day just for you and your writing, and you’ll come to love this special time.
We suggest you allow 1–2 months for The Classic Storytelling Class, 3 months for The Ninety Day Novel, and the remainder of your year, 6 months or more, for The Big Edit, Ultimate Manuscript Assessment, and submission process. But as the course is self-paced, you can take each phase at your own pace, according to your lifestyle, holidays, vacations, and commitments.
You can book your coaching sessions at any time during your year on the course.
You can browse our writing coaches and find the author you would most like to work with, then book your coaching session from your Library.
You may wish to book with an author experienced in the genre you are writing.
Another great way to consider who you want to write with is to take a peek inside the first pages of their published books on Amazon and see whose writing style appeals to you most strongly.
The wonderful thing about The Novelry is that you can work with the writing coach of your choice but also book sessions with any other writing coach whenever you wish. So if things change for your story, say you swap genre, or need more help on specialist technical matters from another coach, we’ve got you covered.
Yes! This is a flexible writing course you can take at your own pace around your other commitments. The time it takes to complete a novel depends on the time you can set aside, but with an hour a day, we know it’s possible to comfortably finish your novel in a year.
If you need more time, you can extend your course and roll over everything, including any unused coaching, editorial, or manuscript sessions.
The cost of another full year is $599 (USD) or £499 (GBP), or you can pay monthly (cancel anytime) at $55 or £45 a month.
Alternatively, you can remain as a member only for just $39.99 or £29.99 a month.
The Ultimate Manuscript Assessment will give you the ultimate feedback on your novel! Plus, you will get feedback on the first three chapters in The Big Edit, and feedback from the community too.
You can also purchase Paid Feedback Sessions for $425 or £350 for a 5,000-word section of your manuscript.
The feedback sessions offer a detailed report and a live editorial debrief recorded for you to keep.
We don’t believe in feedback or workshopping a first draft. It can kill it.
But we do believe in giving feedback on second draft and beyond, where you’re working with us toward publishing standards. Once you know what you’re keeping, it’s time to finesse and only then. So you’ll work with publishing editors formerly of the Big Five publishing houses at that stage. We follow a carefully managed process based on our combined industry experience of how great novels get made.
We will take great care of you and your novel, with every step at just the right time for your development.
Our courses are suitable for people with visual or auditory impairment, dyslexia, and for those with English as a second language. We offer an app which translates the course into 99 languages and a speak-aloud option too.