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The Reality of Writing Fiction.

Dec 16, 2018
 

As you write that last chapter, the temptation is very strong to share some of it. That's when you need a good friend, or better a bad one, or far, far better a fellow writer to tell you -

HELL NO! Hold fire.

Finishing a novel is an emotional moment. Cue Chariots of Fire music.

"Finishing a book is just like you took a child out in the back yard and shot it." Truman Capote.

"After writing a story I was always empty and both sad and happy, as though I had made love, and I was sure this was a very good story although I would not know truly how good until I read it over the next day." Ernest Hemingway.

“I moved, looking for a cigarette. They were in my hand. I lit one. In a moment, I thought, I will say something. I will say something and then I will walk out of this room forever.” James Baldwin, Giovanni's Room.

Oh, the joy of the morning walk before you head to the desk to write that ending! You can see the shining faces of those characters of yours, mouths pursed, their eyes semi-glazed, ready to spill the beans on whodunnit...

Then, when you've done gone and done the who done what, you sit back, shed a little tear and think; right, continuity edit, then I have to let this baby sit for a bit.

The continuity edit is the part where you go back through from beginning to end tying up the loose ends to look like you meant it to end the way it did. (Dates, times, locations, consistency of voices in dialogue - speak them sentences out loud, check the leitmotifs, double-check for immersive detail and notes of dissonance in prose i.e reality bites, and the fall or turn at the end of each chapter.)

If you wrote chronologically and sequentially, you'll be in better shape for this, but even so a few twists and turns at the ending will have taken you by surprise.

This is where I start to persuade myself the author and the reader too that I'm capable of a complex plot. Of course, I'm not. No more than you or anyone is at the get-go.

But over the course of ninety days or more and eighty thousand words a lot has happened and the continuity edit just checks everyone is in the right place at the right time on the right day holding the right props or kissing the right person and so on.

My plot pleases me. That surprises me too given that in September I went off half-cock, with one miserable idea, a sense of humour and strong coffee.

Don't take those things for granted. It takes a lot of work to get your coffee dosage right, and your humour restored after too much real life. One miserable weak idea is always better than none, but even the most pathetic flimsy idea can be a long time coming. You've got to feel it, after all.

I orientate my writing around the equinoxes without even really considering it. The autumn is a great time for writing as the shortening hours of daylight seem to screw your swivel chair to the floor and give a sense of productive urgency. (Quick before the light fades!) I have long had in mind that the 21st September to 21st December shift would be mine.

Once we hit midwinter on 21st this month, I should have completed that continuity edit and will be enjoying the rising trot ride to longer hours daily to expand the work to a readers' draft ( what I call 'the beauty edit').

The energy at the turn of midwinter is one to be harnessed. Spring is a great time to grow a novel from scratch too. (That's why, I'm sure, so many writers join us in January. Do take the free mini-course warm up to write a novel which is some cosy reading for these winter nights to get you prepared to push the pen in Jan.)

So what happened in this write? Here are a few things no decent author would willingly confess.

  1. I didn't get the title settled until I hit the last chapter.
  2. I rewrote the first chapter every day for the entire three months I wrote.
  3. I stopped halfway through, at the midpoint, and went back and did a stocktaking edit to get the story straight wanting a very solid base upon which to proceed further. (I used the Editing Your Novel course to do this.)
  4. I made a decision after I began to honour a woman's story. (This will be as far as any personal politics drives the novel.)
  5. I found my character's real flaw at about 70% of the way through the write.
  6. I planned this book time and time again, at least weekly. I wrote to the Novelry's Five F's of story and had a chaptered outline with word count assigned to this structure. I duplicated and dated my working manuscript daily so I have a complete record of the story's changes and growth.
  7. I planned to work to 4-5000 long chapters, and this was great for organizing the material as it gave me a low number of chapters (and things that had to happen) which I could keep a grasp of mentally but when I write I turn out my chapters at about 1500-2000. That's my way. So 48 chapters it is.
  8. With a very solid base and my midpoint cracked, it was like birthing a baby after the head had crowned. I wrote 30k in ten days (1st Dec at 50k by 12 Dec 79k) and it was joy.
  9. Nothing in the planning prepared me for how my characters were going to interact with each other in the lab of the white page. (This is why at midpoint it was important to me to thoroughly revise the plan to make sure I would stay on track while I danced!)
  10. I put the novel first in terms of priorities and order of the day for the entire period. This meant blocking off two hours and clearing the decks family-wise before I began, settling my duties in so far as I could. I read every night and made notes and pre-visualized the next scene before going to sleep.

I retained just one thing and clung to it in all the revisions, and that was a visual, a scene of which I fairly faithfully retained the key elements. Man, I love that scene. I guess you have to. (And there was one tune, and one dog with me all the way.)

Everything else was a moveable feast. Which is pretty much why I write.

None of the above could happen without having my humour back or coffee.

Writing in good company has been one hell of a perk. Our word count to Christmas with daily shout outs at The Novelry has been very sustaining. Thank you, all my dear writers at The Novelry. A number of you will soon be done too.

Merry bloody Christmas to us, writers. God bless us every one.

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